Hail!
Wow...this was a very surprising story...I read it expecting a Faramir romance...and got Damrod instead! Not an unwelcome surprise....and very well done, so far! I eagerly await your next installment.
I only have one word of criticism...you tend to slip into a Germanic format on some of your dialogue...not too upsetting, but a little distracting.
Wonderful story...(and an interesting twist on the time jumping...bravo!)
See you on the next installment!