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Interrupted Journeys: Part Two--Journeys Perforce (PG-13)
by ellisk.
Chapters [15]
Reviews [19]
Warnings [Battle violence]
Wed Oct 06, 2004 7:13 pm
Like the new chapter. The 'sorcery' with the smoke and fire was a good touch. Aradunnon is turning into a good character. I suppose we will see more of him and Amoneth? Looking forward to the next one.
 
 
The King's Vineyard (R)
by MaryA.
Chapters [50]
Reviews [77]
Warnings [Some mature sexual situations/later chapters]
Sat Oct 02, 2004 6:28 pm
Wow, that was bold of her. But I am very relieved that she didn't react badly to Thranduil because of what the man did to her and the gossip. Post again soon. I'm dying to see how Thranduil reacts.
 
 
Interrupted Journeys: Part Two--Journeys Perforce (PG-13)
by ellisk.
Chapters [15]
Reviews [19]
Warnings [Battle violence]
Sat Oct 02, 2004 6:25 pm
Good chapter. I liked the strategy in the battle--very realistic. I also liked Thranduil remembering the first time he saw the forest compared to this visit to Amon Lanc. Very sad. Post again soon so we can know what happens to Thranduil and Aradunnon.
 
 
The King's Vineyard (R)
by MaryA.
Chapters [50]
Reviews [77]
Warnings [Some mature sexual situations/later chapters]
Sat Sep 25, 2004 8:55 am
This is a good story. I don't usually like plots with non-con as part of the plot but that part was not too graphic. I like the descriptions of the wine making though and the slow build up to what I imagine will be a romance between Thranduil and this OFC. I like the various descriptions of Thranduil. I'll be interested to see how that turns out.
 
 
The Bow (G)
by SpaceWeavil.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [10]
Sat Sep 25, 2004 8:51 am
I love this. I really like Thranduil and Oropher strories and this was wonderful. Great descriptions. You can absolutely picture everything in your mind. And so sad. I like how you made a connection between Oropher enforcing the idea on Thranduil that he is always under people's eye as a child and then the fact that all on the battle field look from the fallen king to Thranduil, their new king. Great!
 
 
Interrupted Journeys: Part Two--Journeys Perforce (PG-13)
by ellisk.
Chapters [15]
Reviews [19]
Warnings [Battle violence]
Sat Sep 25, 2004 8:41 am
I'm glad you started posting the new story. I liked the characterization and the dialogue in the first part and this started out good too. Pretty tense opening scene. Moving so far to the north and how to deal with the rise of Sauron in the forest could not have been easy decisions and I doubt all the elves had the same ideas about them. I'm looking forward to see what happens.
 
 
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