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StoryReview
Terrible Two (PG-13)
by Gloredhel.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [4]
Warnings [Cursing, and child nudity]
Thu Aug 26, 2004 7:07 pm
Very humorous plot, and the writing has potential. I would advise watching your spelling more closely, though. (Mainly your useage of 'thru'.) And the elves act a little bit to... Non-middle Earthy? Un-immortalish? Mainly the swearing. Other than that, enjoyable!