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Vendie

Joined: 01 May 2004
Reviews: 59
Location: Iowa, USA
Mon Aug 23, 2004 11:21 pm
Amusing, but you might want to check your spelling, and the use of obscenities. I might be wrong, but I don't believe that Elves swore very often... Confused smiley face
 
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Viv

Joined: 25 Apr 2003
Reviews: 673
Location: Texas
Tue Aug 24, 2004 4:18 pm
I love the idea of little Estel causing havoc in the placid routines of the Rivendell elves. However, like Vendie I have some concerns about the langauge choices: "little shit" just doesn't seem very elf-like to me. Also, you may want to pass this piece by a beta, or at least a spellchecker (the spelling of "thru" instead of "through" really threw me... hee, I just couldn't resist).
 
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saborice
Joined: 11 Jun 2004
Reviews: 33
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Tue Aug 24, 2004 11:02 pm
Agree with Viv and Vendie. If an elf swore like that, I'd be like----> Shocked smiley face
 
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Deepwoodsdragon
Joined: 26 Aug 2004
Reviews: 1
Location: California
Thu Aug 26, 2004 7:07 pm
Very humorous plot, and the writing has potential. I would advise watching your spelling more closely, though. (Mainly your useage of 'thru'.) And the elves act a little bit to... Non-middle Earthy? Un-immortalish? Mainly the swearing. Other than that, enjoyable!
 
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