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You Can't Put Your Arms Around A Memory (NC-17)
by Andariel.
Chapters [9]
Reviews [22]
Warnings [Sexual content/implications; Language; Violence]
Thu Sep 02, 2004 2:15 pm
Very, very entertaining.... and just 'real' enough to get into! This story gives me hope, you know. And I love Mel and Stel, they aren't 'Mary-Sue's; each has their own problems to contend with, each their own demons to fight. And Elves in the modern world is priceless! That Orophin's first word in our language would be a curse word! I almost laughed myself silly over that one. And Mel wanting to pounce on Haldir as he parades around shirtless -- normal impulses there, girl. I am so with her on that one!

Now that is out of the way, let me say the writing is wonderful, the descriptions very well worded, and the language(s) very authentic. I love the way you have 'humanized' the Elves, making them actual people rather than the 'angels' so many perceive them to be.

Now, where is the next chapter? Come on, give over! Or I'm coming after you! Wink smiley face