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Of Horselords and Bribes (R)
by MorwenofRohan.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 1] Warnings [Some swearing and allusions to sex]
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Thu Aug 24, 2006 11:10 am
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Hey, you finally posted this! And I get to be the first to review! Yay! I always thought this was hilarious, so I'm glad to see it out in public at last. I see you have another story too; I'll have to check that one as well. Anyway, congrats!
--Rose |
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Cold (G)
by Lilan.
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Sat Jul 23, 2005 11:05 pm
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Wonderful! I finally got a chance to read this and I loved it. It's great to see some good moments between Denethor and Faramir. It's so easy to dwell on the bad stuff, but there had to be good times between them too (at least, I think so). Thanks for this!
--Rose |
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The Day Before (G)
by Lilan.
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Mon Jul 11, 2005 11:07 am
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Very nice! It reminds me of a song lyric. Something Éowyn could sing in the musical version of LOTR, maybe! 
--Rose |
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Seeing Stone (G)
by NancyBrooke.
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Thu Jun 09, 2005 9:06 pm
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I enjoyed this very much! I especially like the first sentence. You can already sense how eager he is to try it out.
--Rose |
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A Love To Die For (G)
by Eyborg.
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Sun Jun 05, 2005 9:43 pm
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Very sweet! I really liked Merry and Arwen's conversation, and the wistful tone. Only one tiny grammatical thing leaped out at me: it should be "she laid her hands on his shoulders" instead of "she lay her hands on his shoulders." But that's a small thing, and one that even native speakers mix up sometimes. I really would not have guessed that English was not your first language. Nice job!
--Rose |
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The Long Burden (G)
by Ariel.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 2] Warnings [None]
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Mon May 16, 2005 7:57 pm
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Short yet satisfying. Angst is often so much more effective when underplayed. Gandalf's melancholy at the end is very moving also. I like this piece very much!
--Rose |
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Turnabout (PG)
by Ariel.
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Mon May 16, 2005 7:45 pm
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Well, after rationing it out to myself, I finished the last two chapters in one big "gulp." I'm very pleased to see the whole thing here in one piece! I like Frodo just beginning to realize that maybe he's not going to be all right after all. Merry, Pippin, Sam, Gandalf...really all the characters come through as individuals and sounding themselves. I think this is better than straight h/c; it's deeper and richer. Very satisfying and bittersweet. Kudos!
--Rose |
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Last edited by GypsieRose on Mon May 16, 2005 8:01 pm |
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Waiting (PG-13)
by Lilan.
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Fri Apr 15, 2005 12:36 pm
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I can't believe nobody has reviewed this story yet! Let me be the first. It's so wonderful, and rare, to see Denethor treated with so much sympathy and given credit for being a decent father (when in his right mind) too. I liked Linwen. I'm only sorry this story is almost over! And chapter 6...you just ache for something like that to happen in the book, don't you? I hope you'll write more about this family.
--Rose |
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"Alive" and "Broken" (NC-17)
by Thuriniel.
Chapters [2]
Reviews [ 13] Warnings [explicit sex; strong language]
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Mon Apr 04, 2005 11:26 am
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| Both excellent! "Alive" is a prime example of how a mere 100 words can be surprisingly moving. "Broken" is simply hilarious...though I think Cuthalion has a point about Elven swearing. The idea is great, though! |
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Singer by the shore (PG)
by BethWinter.
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Sat Mar 05, 2005 12:45 pm
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I just realized I've never left you a formal review for this story. It's one of my favorites!
--Rose |
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