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An Elf in Aglarond (G)
by Leila.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [7]
Warnings [none]
Fri Oct 03, 2003 11:01 pm
Poor leggys hand. ::cackles::

Haldir: Translation it means great story, well written, and she was no disapointed in the least.

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What Lies Within (PG)
by LilyFrost.
Chapters [11]
Reviews [2]
Warnings [violence, vampirism]
Sun Aug 17, 2003 11:37 pm
Very Happy smiley face This author is happy now, and this goes along with Tolkiens brief discription of vampire. Good job.
 
 
Weed Dreams (NC-17)
by ZeeDrippyVessel.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [7]
Fri Aug 08, 2003 12:31 am
:: Laughs while Haldir twitches next to her :: Thank goodness you shot the bunny, I needed a good chear up. :: Looks at Haldir :: see Haldir, shooting bunnies good, exspecially when they involve you.
 
 
Storm Warning (PG-13)
by irishelf.
Chapters [11]
Reviews [7]
Warnings [Violence, cruelity, in short torture]
Thu Jul 24, 2003 4:28 pm
Silreth said
> Savage people! Elronds ankles need to be braced if he's ever going to walk again. Estel is extremely cute. Are they going to be given a break? You're story allows readers to feel emotions ( I hope it's not just me), that's a sign of a good writer. It is a great story but you should watch your conventions. A lot of your grammar is out of place. You should also try to stick to either past or present tense. Other than that it's a great story.

Glad I got my emotions going across, thank you for the two points I need to watch out for. I'm used to writing present tense and not past tense so at times I do forget. As for my grammer. -_- I hate to say it, but grammer is one thing I have yet to learn and keep in my mind.

I hope you coninue to read my story, torturing readers is what I love to do, even if it takes some time to prick there emotions... Just wait for what's planned next story ::cackles evily:: Twisted Evil smiley face