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Until fate reigns (G)
by Rhapsody.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [4]
Sun Nov 19, 2006 11:10 am

Celegorm is a meanie head. Razz smiley face Curufin should have kicked his butt. lol That was cute. I like seeing brotherly banter amongst my favorite family. Well done.
 

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Last edited by Alassante on Tue Nov 21, 2006 1:17 am
 
A Gift of Tears (PG)
by vladazhael.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [5]
Warnings [Angst]
Fri Nov 17, 2006 7:30 pm

Wow - I didn't even know you had written this. Anyway - here is a copy of my MEFA review. Smile smiley face

A Gift of Tears is a short tale that is very touching in its simplicity. Knowing Vladazhael the way I do, I was not surprised by the fact that she wrote a story about an elleth that wants to fight rather than wallow in self pity at the loss of all her kin, her brother most recently. Its very fitting that she would write this because that it how she herself would be and I rather like the fact that ellith and women of Middle Earth were sometimes the biggest heroines. The ‘weaker sex’ is proven wrong a lot in fan fiction but it’s a close call between writing a strong female and writing the dreaded ‘Mary Sue’ of original characters. I’m glad to see that Vlad never crossed this line with her OFC. In fact, she leaves us hanging, never knowing if Haldir trained her or not. And she cried without appearing weak which is another task often hard to accomplish in writing. Cry too much and you’re a wimp, cry too little and its cold and won’t reach out to people. This story manages to show a strong female that was still touching in her sorrow. And just a glimpse of the softer more sensitive side of Haldir without going overboard. Excellent writing.
 
 
Just a Little Shove (G)
by inglor.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [13]
Warnings [OOC Balrog Slayer and Lord of Rivendell]
Sat Aug 19, 2006 9:34 pm

LOL I can't believe I missed this. That was awesome Inglor. And after watching the movie a few times I thought the same thing!! "Just shove him in." Very Happy smiley face Great one.
 
 
Requiem (PG-13)
by Rhapsody.

Chapters [6]
Reviews [15]
Warnings [Angst, character death, grief, battle scenes]
Sun Apr 09, 2006 12:56 am

OMG - This totally made me get all misty.Cry smiley face Perhaps because I love my pets like they are family. How nice it is to see a softer side to Celegorm, who showed so little gentleness in the Silm. This is just wonderful Rhaps. I love it. The part about his vow not being Huan's - so wonderfully done. Clap, Clap, Clap smiley face
 
 
Taur Ingem (G)
by NancyBrooke.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [5]
Warnings [None]
Thu Apr 06, 2006 11:59 am

Thanks for pointing out this gem. Very poignant moment for Boromir realizing that this could be his father, then his own future future. Your drabbles are always so beautiful and expressive.
 
 
Triple E (G)
by sivan.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [2]
Warnings [None. Fluffy counts?]
Tue Mar 07, 2006 7:26 pm

I am a little confused. Elladan and Elrohir were 2800 years older than Estel. Is that why you put this in the AU section? Confused smiley face Am I being too picky here? I'm not a canon-nazi but thats a BIG change in canon.
 
 
Master of Shadows (R)
by SpaceWeavil.

Chapters [7]
Reviews [20]
Warnings [sexual situations; violence; mil]
Thu Feb 23, 2006 12:54 pm

Okay I think Lust is now my favorite. I bet thats no shock.

a pair of heavy doors, on which was carved a likeness of Fëanor, lying in his sons’ arms at the Battle Underneath the Stars. Morindur breathed deeply as he inspected the work. To think that he had stood in the presence of that bloodline’s last scion barely moments before.

Nice touch! I really liked the way Gladdy handled him. Very good interaction between them and his disdain for the elves is not surprising. I mean he is just a Man after all.
Rolling Eyes smiley face Another Gem Space.
 

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Last edited by Alassante on Tue Feb 28, 2006 6:09 pm
 
Master of Shadows (R)
by SpaceWeavil.

Chapters [7]
Reviews [20]
Warnings [sexual situations; violence; mil]
Thu Feb 23, 2006 12:42 pm

Ha! He just got there and he's already planning to take over. So very WiKi (stealing from Mita) of him. He's definately gotten greedy Actually no, he's been greedy all alone I think. Another wonderful one Space. Now I gotta go read Lust so shhh....
 
 
Master of Shadows (R)
by SpaceWeavil.

Chapters [7]
Reviews [20]
Warnings [sexual situations; violence; mil]
Thu Feb 23, 2006 12:36 pm

Wrath is such a tease!! You left a cliffhanger on that one. What's wrong with the queen? Why did she make him leave? URGH I cannot believe you did that. Evil or Very Mad smiley face

That was great though. Your descriptions of things in your writing is just so detailed I feel like I'm standing right there. Which during Envy was a baaaad thing. He was right though - he would make people fear him.

Bravo Clap, Clap, Clap smiley face
 
 
Master of Shadows (R)
by SpaceWeavil.

Chapters [7]
Reviews [20]
Warnings [sexual situations; violence; mil]
Tue Feb 21, 2006 1:43 pm

Envy - he's creepy. And ebol. But I guess, he's supposed to be. That was wickedly entertaining Space. Very creepy and Witch King'ish, setting the tone for his later attributes. Bravo. Twisted Evil smiley face