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Reason in Madness (R)
by NiennaNir.
Chapters [14]
Reviews [33]
Warnings [Dark Humor]
Mon Mar 14, 2005 12:24 pm
I'm with ghettoelleth, your writing is strong, good voice, character and adding intrigue. I'm interested to see where this is going.
 
 
Estel's Ears (G)
by paranoidangel.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [4]
Sun Feb 27, 2005 9:33 am
I liked seeing into Aragorn's realization of his 'humanity.' It must have been hard to deal with the differences between men and elves after being raised amongst the elves. Introspective, as Ellisk said, but not angsty. A good, but difficult, combination to achieve.
 
 
Those Also Serve Who Stand and Wait (G)
by Haleth.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [5]
Sun Feb 27, 2005 9:25 am
Others have gone back to Aman, pardoned by the Powers for their earlier defiance. I remain here, seemingly too proud to ask for forgiveness. In truth I am too weak to face the empty places where I once laughed. I will wait here, an Exile, until the end.

I found this very powerful -- how often despair can be called pride! You've really captured the emotions she felt -- and kept it all within canon -- and within such a short piece. Well done.
 
 
A Battle of a Different Kind (PG)
by Katzilla.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [6]
Mon Jan 03, 2005 6:08 pm
I have to agree with SpaceWeevil, you have an incredible appreciation of the English language if it isn't your mothertongue ... better than most who grow up knowing only that language. I really enjoyed the emotion you caught between the two siblings. And the reminder of Grima at the end. Well done! Smile smiley face
 
 
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