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Primoris (PG-13)
by SecretKeeper.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [3]
Wed Feb 09, 2005 4:20 pm
This has got a very....medieval feel to it? By that I mean when you are reading, you don't feel like you're about to embark on some Steinbeck/Eliot-esque voyage of oddity and depression, or that you are suddenly going to find yourself in the mist of a Danielle Steele-verse. The language gives the story edge and authority without losing its modern-ness.

I agree that the prologue could perhaps be condensed. Maybe because I'm familiar with some of the historic material, but also because it is a prologue and readers can have short attention spans (I'm guilty for sure). The foreshadowing is great. I love a good tease.
 
 
Bloodlines and Lifestyles (G)
by ElrondsBailiff.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [4]
Warnings [Extreme seriousness]
Tue Jan 18, 2005 1:39 am
Well-written and informative. I've been on the hunt for elven information as of late and this helped clear up elven history for me. Excellent work.