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Rider of the Mark (NC-17)
by ZeeDrippyVessel.

Chapters [49]
Reviews [188]
Warnings [blood, guts, and war. Oh yeah. And sex. Eventually]
Wed Jun 15, 2005 3:12 pm

Hard to believe this just gets better and better. Chapter 18 is absolutely the best thing I have EVER read in fanfiction. Very poignant and realistic. It's there, you can feel yourself in Gamling's boots. The chapters leading into it and following it are amazing as well. You set a scene like no other. I check daily to see if you have updated.

Have you considered giving Bruce a copy of this? Smile smiley face
 
 
Use me once (NC-17)
by ZeeDrippyVessel.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [16]
Wed Jun 15, 2005 2:55 pm

Your first one, eh? Very nice. I do see the difference between this, your first and your most current - Rider of the Mark; can definately see how you've grown as a writer. Still, this is an amazing first piece. I always thought Eowyn was a bit on the bratty side, and this shows up quite well here. The dialogue is lovely and the sex is just right. Just how one would expect Legolas to be. Good job.
 
 
Rider of the Mark (NC-17)
by ZeeDrippyVessel.

Chapters [49]
Reviews [188]
Warnings [blood, guts, and war. Oh yeah. And sex. Eventually]
Wed Feb 16, 2005 9:18 am

Wow! Shocked smiley face

This is amazing. I read this, pulled out my DVD's of TTT and ROTK and looked harder at Gamling. I'll never look at him the same again! Shocked smiley face Never thought I would think of someone as sexy as Eomer. You make older men look good, woman!

I will admit to being a little confused at first, but once I got into your stride (you have one) and realizing you put us in Gamling's head, what a ride! You've made this background character VERY interesting. You write very live. It's like being there. I can smell the hay in the barn, it's that real.

Your knowledge of horses is evident. I really appreciated how you showed Eomer caring for his own horse and showed how Gamling nad Aefre care and exercise theirs as well. Watching for foundering and care of the frog of the hoof - you know your stuff. Hats off and when do you update? Very Happy smiley face