Reviews by Shanalir

Dialling the Pegasus Galaxy · Tue Jun 28, 2005 5:56 pm

REally enjoyed this! Laughing smiley face

Any chance you'll take it further? I'd love to see mrry and Pip wreak havok on an unsuspecting military run organisation. (As former military, that would be particularly enjoyable. Wink smiley face

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Cross Wife off the List · Tue Jun 28, 2005 5:51 pm

This was such a sweet story. I really enjoyed the character interaction. I think there were a number of places where you could have eliminated the commas (you seemed to use them more than you needed to), but other than that, the whole piece was a delight to read.

Spring Fling · Tue Jun 28, 2005 9:53 am

Loved it! I could just see the dropped jaws, bulging eyes, horrified expressions and unwilling fascination. Excellent job!

A House Is A House Is A House (Drabble) · Tue Jun 28, 2005 9:50 am

i loved the last line! It conjured such an image! I could just see it! So adorable.

Soul's Journey · Tue Jun 28, 2005 9:48 am

I loved the way you conveyed boromir's impressions of Imladris and Moria. A lot of the time, Boromir is viewed as solely a fighter, with his brother being the intellectual of the family. You portrayed a very natural thoughtfulness. Excellent job.

Maybe We Should Stay In Minas Tirith · Tue Jun 28, 2005 9:40 am

Oh, my! I laughed so hard at this! I could just see it! Very well done!

The World of Men · Tue Jun 28, 2005 9:34 am

You fit so much detail into this piece! I love the way you did it! Great picture!

Adar & Ion: Ada, I Dreamt of Nana · Mon Jun 27, 2005 10:38 am

That was so sweet. Such a tender, poignant story. I really enjoyed it.

The Plague · Sun Jun 26, 2005 11:30 am

Wow! Loved the drama. Great story!

Do not go gentle into that good night · Sun Jun 26, 2005 11:05 am

Wow! Suspense! Please post again soon! I gotta know what happens next!

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