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Moralanqua

Joined: 12 May 2003 Reviews: 167
Location: Scotland
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Thu Jun 17, 2004 9:51 am
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I think its an utter insult that some asswipe gave this piece a low star rating.
This fic has the making of being fantastic! I really mean that. The quality oozes in Chapter 1, research and canon are evident and your narrative is spot on. Chapter 2 is weaker and needs some work IMO to match the outstanding tone of chapter 1. I think you should get this fic Beta Read - it needs some polish but not much and I promise you that this really is a GREAT and high quality beginning. I haven't seen talent manifest itself like this for some time and im excited to see how this one progresses.
I beg you not to go silly and make huge AU plot turns. I think this can go perfectly well as a canon fic and still incorporate any ideas you have planned.
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SamwiseTheStrong
Joined: 27 Feb 2004 Reviews: 52
Location: Oregon, USA
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Sun Jun 27, 2004 2:37 am
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Hello
I love your Faramir character, and the fact that Aragorn got a laugh out of his and Eomer's redecorating. Very lovely. This will go on my recomended reading list.
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aveela
Joined: 15 Feb 2004 Reviews: 22
Location: New York
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Wed Nov 17, 2004 9:41 pm
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hehe i love that son. have you ever heard it before!!! its soo good, its based on the poem (do not go gentle into that good night)
by the way, good story!!! i like how you interpret your charecters! |
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aveela
Joined: 15 Feb 2004 Reviews: 22
Location: New York
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Wed Nov 17, 2004 9:41 pm
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hehe i love that son. have you ever heard it before!!! its soo good, its based on the poem (do not go gentle into that good night)
by the way, good story!!! i like how you interpret your charecters! |
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Shanalir
Joined: 27 Feb 2005 Reviews: 183
Location: Umm, anyone seen my map?
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Sun Mar 13, 2005 11:23 pm
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I only just ran accross this fic, and since I love anything with Faramir in it (such a great character), I decided to give it a try. Boy, am I glad I did. I don't normally go for angsty stories, I figure there's enough angst in real life without adding fictional angst to it. But this story goes far beyond angst to suspense, drama, and becomes a most intrigueing story. Hopefully you're adding more soon, I look forward to the rest of the story. (BTW, you have a talent, an absolute gift for cliffhangers. I've read published mystery authors who don't accomplish it as gracefully.) Props!  |
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Shanalir
Joined: 27 Feb 2005 Reviews: 183
Location: Umm, anyone seen my map?
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Wed Apr 27, 2005 6:22 pm
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| Love the new chapter. Post again soon, please! I am really loving this fic! |
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nienor

Joined: 26 May 2005 Reviews: 58
Location: Cologne (Germany)
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Sat May 28, 2005 4:58 pm
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Hi, I hope you will go on! It's very exciting, and I'd really like to know if they find Faramir before it's too late! (I hope that you won't kill him, but you never know....) More please!  |
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Shanalir
Joined: 27 Feb 2005 Reviews: 183
Location: Umm, anyone seen my map?
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Sun Jun 26, 2005 11:05 am
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| Wow! Suspense! Please post again soon! I gotta know what happens next! |
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nienor

Joined: 26 May 2005 Reviews: 58
Location: Cologne (Germany)
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Wed Aug 10, 2005 3:13 am
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And again: I hope you won't kill him!
Certainly Aragorn will be able to help him.
So just update, please! Nienor  |
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Shanalir
Joined: 27 Feb 2005 Reviews: 183
Location: Umm, anyone seen my map?
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Wed Aug 10, 2005 8:02 am
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| He's not gonna die!...........is he? I hope he makes a sudden recovery! please post again soon, I'm on the edge of my seat. |
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