Reviews by RobinKa

Paradox of the Fourth Age · Thu Feb 08, 2007 4:56 pm

Thank you for another splendid chapter. It was touching, funny and thrilling.

I loved the flashback with the arrival of the Twins in Aman, and especially their meeting with Glorfindel and Laureanna. Oh, and Rumil too Smile smiley face

Then, the current events - poor Laureanna, she had to be so careful not to reveal too much and still to sound believable.

I'm looking forward to seeing the next part. Thank you again Smile smiley face

Paradox of the Fourth Age · Mon Jan 29, 2007 12:01 pm

It is so so so great to see another chapter, and *takes a deep breath* what a chapter it was! Oh my!

Well, the scene in Rivendell made me shiver. I found this scene thrilling, especially when Sauron poured the miruvor on the desk. It was a very poignant, significant moment, when the Dark Lord claimed rule over the former elven home. And I felt so sad reading about Cirdan and the Grey Havens Sad smiley face

You've brightened the mood of the chapter by portraying a private moment Laureanna and Elrohir shared, and it was really good to see the light in the darkness around them.

Excellent read! I hope to see more soon, and thank you for updating!

To Watch Them Dance · Tue Jan 23, 2007 9:00 am

Awwwww

Such a cute, little tale. Nicely done! Thank you for sharing.

Fire and Ice · Wed Jan 10, 2007 1:49 pm

You know, I've been waiting for the next installment of your wonderful saga, and when you told me you'd written a bit and wanted to share it with me, I got all bouncy. I knew this particular chapter was a difficult one to write, but I can honestly say you've done a great job, like I told you in private, both in presenting an opening chapter of another tale in the set and the continuation of what you've got so far.

I like the bits about the weather - they comply and supply the mood of the chapter beautifully. I like Morwen and Folcwyn's, let's say, argument. And I like your portrayal of Hama - you've uncovered enough details for a reader to get curious about his past and present, but you haven't revealed too much Smile smiley face

I'd like to add, I'm really amazed at how you've worked the motive of a child/family into this chapter and presented it from different perspectives.

Should I say I'm already hooked? Smile smiley face

I'm looking forward to the next part. And am always happy to help you Very Happy smiley face

B.

The Empty Vessel · Sat Jan 06, 2007 3:24 pm

I read this story at the very dawn of my fan fiction adventure, and it still remains one of the best stories I've ever read. Thank you, Zee, for sharing it with us.

Best wishes,
Binka

The Crossing · Sat Jan 06, 2007 2:45 pm

This is the 3rd time I try to submit a review but my IE is a b... Wink smiley face

Well, on to the review.

I really love the way in which you've written this set of drabbles. To me, they represent not only three different points of view on a specific situation, but also the past, present and future of Turgon's small family. These were great insights, Isil, and really outstanding pieces of writing. And they fit the challenge perfectly. Thanks for sharing!

Binka

Capturing the moonlight · Sat Jan 06, 2007 2:04 pm

I told you this before, but I want to say it once again. Thank you for your great, fabulous Xmas gift. I'd suspected you'd write something featuring my fav warden, but this was a complete, and such an awesome, surprise. I love every single bit of this short story. Every single sentence. The references to the moon are very adequate and elf-like, and the scene itself is way more than steamy Very Happy smiley face

Thank you!

(((hugs)))

End of a Quest · Sat Jan 06, 2007 1:56 pm

Very rarely, to my knowledge, we get to hear Beren's voice and thoughts. This was a great drabble, Trekkie Smile smiley face

Very evocative. Thank you for sharing Smile smiley face

Immortal Remembrance · Tue Jan 02, 2007 1:04 pm

Very touching, beautifully written; so much said in so few words. Great job! Thank you for sharing Smile smiley face

I Dare You · Sat Dec 30, 2006 1:16 pm

You captured the moment perfectly Very Happy smiley face

Hehehe, I love it! Great job!

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