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Paradox of the Fourth Age (NC-17)
by Alassante.
Chapters [29]
Reviews [ 118] Warnings [character death, graphic battle scenes, sex]
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Tue Dec 13, 2005 2:01 am
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I think I told you this the other day. Every time I see another chapter of your story I go like *squeee* It wasn't different today in the morning when I got an update message 
This is fascinating chapter. The flashback, ah Al, I love the way you've mixed humor in the entire conversation between Indil, Thranduil's wife and others; lovely. So, Glorfindel let Elrond win the sparring...?  You told me you were uncertain whether to write Glorfindel and Indil together. It was such a romantic moment in the story.
I can see Laureanna and Elrohir's relationship is not going to be an easy one. But, I don't think she will marry Gimli in the end 
The most frightening moment was, of course, Laureanna's dream and Celebrimbor's death. I love to see you've worked a bit of the Noldor tragic history into the plot.
Amazing! I'm dying to see what is going to happen next
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Of Fire and Passion (NC-17)
by isilelensar.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 5] Warnings [sex toward the end]
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Mon Dec 12, 2005 12:33 pm
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| What a vivid picture. I really like the way you portrayed eagerness, comparing the fire of their encounter with the heat of the forge. Very enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing |
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Choices (G)
by Lialathuveril.
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Mon Dec 12, 2005 2:17 am
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I'm going to second others by saying that you have chosen the character very well. Very nicely done and thoughtful drabble Thank you for sharing.
Binka |
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In the Bleak Midwinter (PG)
by SpaceWeavil.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 4] Warnings [character death]
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Mon Dec 12, 2005 2:02 am
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Reposted? Does it mean I'm that blind that I missed it the other day...? 
Seriously, this is magnificent. I love everything about this short story. Your description of the forest is thrilling, I felt chills on my neck. The language is beautiful, the story flows smoothly, and it's so atmospheric  Terror and fear creep between the lines, and I couldn't help looking over my shoulder to assure myself no one was lurking there and watching me. Thranduil, young and hungry for revenge, is portrayed in the most touching way, yet it was Oropher - a voice of reason - who caught my attention in particular. Their pain and suffering were almost palpable. The reunion of the family in the end gave hope, and this was, I think, the most impactful moment in the story. Bravo, I'm stunned  Thank you for sharing.
10 stars Spacey |
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On An Elfling Discovering the "Difference" (G)
by Emmess.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 11] Warnings [none]
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Sun Dec 11, 2005 11:12 am
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| Wonderfully written and very funny! Thank you |
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Love's Beginning (PG-13)
by isilelensar.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 2] Warnings [none]
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Sun Dec 11, 2005 7:20 am
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| Another beautiful drabble It's very sweet, and romantic, and so nice insight into Orophin's thoughts and feelings. I especially like this line: For so long, his dreams showed him his heart's wish: to possess and be possessed completely by the woman who captured his heart and did not let go. Very poignant. Thank you for sharing |
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King of the World (G)
by SpaceWeavil.
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Sun Dec 11, 2005 6:31 am
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| This is an excellent drabble and an exceptionally good choice of the character. I love the way you described Morgoth, with all the evil he possessed, and this grimace of a smile *shudder* Just brilliant. Thank you for sharing |
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Morning Encounters (NC-17)
by isilelensar.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 1] Warnings [sex]
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Sun Dec 11, 2005 5:24 am
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You're right  What a nice way to wake up.
Good job, thanks for sharing |
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Letters in the sand (G)
by Rhapsody.
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Tue Dec 06, 2005 1:36 am
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| This is an amazing story, and very original, from the first line to the last. Once I read that some things were engraved in Maglor's soul, I realized how powerful beginning this line was. Letters can be drawn gently, by a subtle stroke of a quill, or by a sharp draw of a chisel. Maglor's soul bears stigmas that have been drawn in the most cruel way. And I love the idea of inserting these letters into the story. Very poignant and beautiful. Thank you for sharing |
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The Trees Remember (R)
by VanatheEverYoung.
Chapters [37]
Reviews [ 101] Warnings [Holocaust ref.; violence; sexual situations]
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Sun Dec 04, 2005 1:47 am
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Okay, the elves and the car - priceless. Good job with bringing some humor in this chapter. I love a small insight into Legolas' thoughts during his watch, very poignant. But, ah, the end and the fight! I think I bit into my wrist when Alatar managed to beat the three of them. Again, an excellent characterization of the evil Istar, emphasized by the description of the Reich Chancellery. I knew that this chapter would end with yet another cliffhanger, but you kept me on the edge of my seat nonetheless. Bravo! and please don't make us wait too long, pretty please
Binka |
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