Reviews by flowingrace

By the Sea · Thu May 26, 2005 8:32 pm

Yay, another chapter! It was cute, that you're separating them, and then letting them fall back in love. A love story with a twist...that they're already married! Razz smiley face

I'm so excited to see what happens next, and how Elfhelm is going to play in the plot. Can't wait till the next chapter!

Silence · Tue May 24, 2005 6:37 pm

This was a great piece of writing. I loved how you started off with so much description, and then worked out the plot. You described Nerdanel and her plight beautifully, and I think you did a great job characterizing her. Your diction was also great, and I really enjoyed this lovely piece of writing.

By the Sea · Tue May 24, 2005 6:03 pm

So, Lothirel finally got the courage to tell him that she doens't love him. How sad...now I'm really interested in how they're going to get back togther! Keep updating! Smile smiley face

By the Sea · Sun May 15, 2005 3:27 pm

I really liked this beginning. It sounds like the story's going to be really good and interesting! It is a creative way to look at the relationship and I can't wait till you update!

Elanor's Revenge · Sun Apr 24, 2005 8:40 pm

I love your fic! I love Haldir too, but that's a given. ^_^
I found this story last night, and I read it all at one go. Yeah, that took me a whole day, and I stayed up until two reading...instead of doing my homework...love procrastination! I cannot wait until you update!
This story is absolutely the best!

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