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The Circles: Book Three: To Escape a Dark Destiny (R)
by AngmarAndElfhild.

Chapters [40]
Reviews [4]
Warnings [Violence, mature themes, horror]
Tue Jul 24, 2007 5:27 pm

Very nice chapter, Angmar and Elfhild.
I loved this song thrush... Very well done. Also it is quite interesting to learn the Haradrim's REAL feelings towards Sauron.
Cheers, Agan
 
 
The Blind and Buttonless Horseman (R)
by AngmarsElfhild.

Chapters [2]
Reviews [10]
Warnings [Sex]
Tue Jul 24, 2007 5:26 pm

Wauu.. Great day! You have updated, Elfhild!

Vardandil... he-he!

Please don't make us wait too long to learn what happened next! I am most excited.
 
 
The Circles: Book Three: To Escape a Dark Destiny (R)
by AngmarAndElfhild.

Chapters [40]
Reviews [4]
Warnings [Violence, mature themes, horror]
Mon Jul 09, 2007 3:27 pm

Olórë Hwárin Mallë
What a wonderful chapter Elfhild, delightfully gothic!

Truly fascinating how the two girls recollect the same events so differently. Why was Elfled so priviledged as to remember an erotic dream, while Elfhild experienced a nightmare?

I loved how the scars disappered with the light - nice touch.

Cheers, Agan
 
 
Who The Sword Devours (R)
by NancyBrooke.

Chapters [12]
Reviews [23]
Warnings [Blood, Guts, Sex, Angst]
Sat May 26, 2007 3:57 pm

Thank you, Nancy.
Pity the tale has ended. I hope you will write a sequel - I would love to hear your Boromir's voice again!
 
 
Who The Sword Devours (R)
by NancyBrooke.

Chapters [12]
Reviews [23]
Warnings [Blood, Guts, Sex, Angst]
Wed May 23, 2007 8:05 pm

I love the story more and more. The style is unique. No, it is not an emulation of the Master's: often it is smoother, more expressive, more evocative than the Master's (I know it is a blasphemy, but I have to say it).

As a nazgul fan I have read quite a few fanfics describing the battle of Osgiliath - but this one is the best by far. The growing tension - the feel of a powerful mind directing the enemies this time - the gathering darkness and fear - and here they come, the Nazgul led by the Witch-King.
"Minutes, days, months seemed to fly past in the eddies of his cloak: all blood, all fire, all bones, all dust." Every word is a gem.

The only thing that seems wrong to me is the description of the horses: as 'horrifically despoiled things." This is a bow to the movie - in the book the horses that the nazgul rode all the way to the Shire were perfectly normal. Gandalf says as much, and nobody who saw the riders commented on the weirdness of their horses. The only despoiled horse in the LOTR is Mouth's - but it was used in a parley and was meant to horrify the other side.

I wonder - if Boromir sits in Tharbad nursing his wounds long enough, he is bound to see the Nine again - on their way to the Shire. They crossed the Gwathlo around September 20-21, according to the Tale of Years. I so hope, Nancy, you will let Boromir see how THEY managed to cross the river.
 
 
Who The Sword Devours (R)
by NancyBrooke.

Chapters [12]
Reviews [23]
Warnings [Blood, Guts, Sex, Angst]
Thu May 10, 2007 6:22 am

Awesome beginning! I loved every word of it.
 
 
The Circles: Book Two: Journey of Sorrow (R)
by AngmarAndElfhild.

Chapters [24]
Reviews [79]
Warnings [Violence, rape, very mature themes]
Sat Apr 14, 2007 9:55 pm

OWW, now we meet an ... Ent! That was unexpected! I wonder will this one be helpful?
Very interesting twist,
Agan
 
 
The Sword of Elendil (R)
by GandalfsApprentice.

Chapters [11]
Reviews [7]
Warnings [battle scenes]
Sun Apr 01, 2007 1:42 pm

A very interesting, well written story. Thank you for posting. I will be waiting for updates!

Cheers,
Agan
 
 
The Circles: Book Two: Journey of Sorrow (R)
by AngmarAndElfhild.

Chapters [24]
Reviews [79]
Warnings [Violence, rape, very mature themes]
Sun Apr 01, 2007 1:37 pm

Wonderful chapter, Angmar and Elfhild!

Wauu.. what a delightful nazgul... He is quite hot .. I mean cool... I mean... whatever. Which one is this - I wonder?
This one is a sort of a vampire, it seems. But at least he will leave them alive, I hope... No harm done.

Elfled surprised me though - in this Chapter. I thought she was the shy one, why Elfhild was more brazen with men. Here their roles are reversed.

Thank you for answering my questions so fully, Angmar. Now I know where we are.

Agan
 
 
The Circles: Book Two: Journey of Sorrow (R)
by AngmarAndElfhild.

Chapters [24]
Reviews [79]
Warnings [Violence, rape, very mature themes]
Fri Mar 16, 2007 4:11 am

Oh, my! What a wondrous chapter, Angmar and Elfhild! Incredibly captivating! And ending in a cliff-hanger...

I know now what you meant when writing "Stay tuned for more"!

I guess they met a nazgul there somewhere at the banks of Anduin. Am I right? The mysterious stranger can hardly be anything else with his talk of eyes and his sniffing and his mind-games. But what was a nazgul doing there all alone - resting his Fell Beast?

Now that I think about it, I have no idea what the date might be. It is what - July 3019? Or later? I guess the battle at Helm's Deep had already been lost and the nazgul had to be recalled to Barad-Dur for punishment? Or was the poor wraith right on his way there taking his last breath of fresh air?

And the description of the Moon was very well written and quite appropriate to the theme.
I am so very grateful for including this stray nazgul. Love them, as you surely know.

Cheers, Aganuzir