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The Circles: Book Two: Journey of Sorrow (R)
by AngmarAndElfhild.
Chapters [24]
Reviews [ 79] Warnings [Violence, rape, very mature themes]
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Mon Oct 16, 2006 6:00 pm
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Very interesting chapter, Angmar and Elfhild!
WaW, Goldwyn abandoned her children! That was unexpected. I hope they will all be caught and reunited.  |
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The Circles: Book Two: Journey of Sorrow (R)
by AngmarAndElfhild.
Chapters [24]
Reviews [ 79] Warnings [Violence, rape, very mature themes]
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Mon Oct 09, 2006 6:31 pm
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Thank you, Elfhild for your detailed answer. 
I liked the next chapter.
" By the holy Melkor's black balls, it's all over! We're nazhatuga! Shakh azubizgûk!"
That was priceless! 
Why didn't they make a good plan where to run beforehand?
Also, gripping a piece of wood and swimming down the Anduin was not a bad idea, I believe. Why nobody thought about it? They would eventually reach Pelargir and the free lands around the delta. |
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The Circles: Book Two: Journey of Sorrow (R)
by AngmarAndElfhild.
Chapters [24]
Reviews [ 79] Warnings [Violence, rape, very mature themes]
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Sat Sep 23, 2006 2:01 pm
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It seems Feanorean madness never leads to good.
Poor Elfled - she should have voiced her opinion. It looks like the twins are really bound together stronger than sisters. And poor old Leofgifu - she is not so stiff-necked as she seemed, after all.
I have forgotten - why did the twins despise Goldwyn before her speech?
Awesome chapter.
Keep writing,
Agan |
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The Circles: Book Two: Journey of Sorrow (R)
by AngmarAndElfhild.
Chapters [24]
Reviews [ 79] Warnings [Violence, rape, very mature themes]
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Sun Sep 17, 2006 6:24 pm
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| Awesome speech! I was truly moved. I hope for the best... |
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Darkness Remains (PG-13)
by Khamul.
Chapters [8]
Reviews [ 5] Warnings [Angst; Mild Romance; Violence]
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Sun Sep 17, 2006 6:20 pm
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Great story, Khamul!
Very interesting, indeed. The plot is most original - I have never read a story of surviving Eight.
One nitpick:
It seems the nazgul wore no rings. Sauron kept their rings himself and so controlled them. Have a look in the Unfinished Tales "the Hunt for the Ring":
..."his mightiest servants, the Ringwraiths, who had no will but his own, being each utterly subservient to the ring that had enslaved him, which Sauron held."
So, I would say, the first thing to do was to go dig their rings out of the wreck of Barad-Dur.
I will be watching this story, please, keep writing.
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The Circles: Book Two: Journey of Sorrow (R)
by AngmarAndElfhild.
Chapters [24]
Reviews [ 79] Warnings [Violence, rape, very mature themes]
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Sat Sep 09, 2006 9:59 am
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Great new chapter, Angmar and Elfhild.
What a foolish woman, this Goldwyn! To turn down such a brilliant proposal which meant salvation for her and her sons as well.
Well we shall see what happens when they try to run away... |
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The Blind and Buttonless Horseman (R)
by AngmarsElfhild.
Chapters [2]
Reviews [ 10] Warnings [Sex]
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Fri Sep 01, 2006 4:07 pm
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Thank you for the answers, Elfhild!
Yes, I have checked out the challenge.
It is really very-very funny.
I agree, the "Blind and buttonless horseman" makes one think of the nazgul, and who is the blindest in daylight? Khamul, of course. Bravo, Elfhild!
"Lord of the hissy-fit" sounds like another nazgul story to me.
"A little closer to the edge" – Manwe and Varda on Taniquetil spring to mind. Unless it is about Gandalf and Saruman in Orthanc... or Gandalf and the Barlog on Zirak-Zigil… Nooo, too disturbing.
"Craddle robber" – Gollum of course…and a Mirkwood she-elf.
"Gimme back my shirt" - Shagrat and Gorbag, probably.
"The legend of the totally lost mountie" Beren and Lutien
"Rehab romance" – about Elves who sailed to Valinor and found love there
"The Sheriff of gay country" – Shire story.
"Thou shalt sin" – Numenor story.
"Get a room." – Rangers in Bree
"Join my cult, please" – Sauron in Numenor
Now, please, update soon, Elfhild!  |
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Last edited by Aganuzir on Sat Sep 02, 2006 3:18 am |
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The Blind and Buttonless Horseman (R)
by AngmarsElfhild.
Chapters [2]
Reviews [ 10] Warnings [Sex]
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Wed Aug 30, 2006 10:54 am
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Hilarious story, Elfhild!
Poor bookish Khamul in a brothel...
I loved it:
"Oh, come on, Kham, 'tis time you got out and really... lived a little,"
Please, keep writing this funny story, Elfhild. I am dying to know what happened next. 
One question though. If the nazgul could appear to mortals in any guise, projecting images into their minds, then why would Khamul choose to look like an Easterling but not as a Gondorian? Less trouble at the bridge and no qualms at being "seen with the two fools" and recognised. 
Or did he simply hate to look like a Tark? |
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Last edited by Aganuzir on Wed Aug 30, 2006 12:20 pm |
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The Circles: Book Two: Journey of Sorrow (R)
by AngmarAndElfhild.
Chapters [24]
Reviews [ 79] Warnings [Violence, rape, very mature themes]
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Sun Aug 27, 2006 4:34 am
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Great last chapter (19), Angmar and Elfhild. 
I really enjoyed Esarhaddon's story: very realistic. So the slaver was only being kind to the children...It must be dawning more and more on Goldwyn and sons that the Haradrim are not so very different basically from the men of the Mark.
So there are frequent plagues in Nurn...? Couldn't the Dark Lord do something to protect his subjects? Or is he only good at causing plagues, not at stopping them? 
Thank you for the new chapter,
Agan |
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The Circles: Book Two: Journey of Sorrow (R)
by AngmarAndElfhild.
Chapters [24]
Reviews [ 79] Warnings [Violence, rape, very mature themes]
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Mon Aug 21, 2006 5:17 pm
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Nice new chapter. Thank you for updating. Great description of Goldwyn's new clothes.
Still don't see why the slaver wants her children to dine with him as well... |
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