Reviews for "Darkness Remains"

Sun Sep 17, 2006 4:20 pm

Khamul, good going! There can never be enough Nazgul stories for me. Keep writing.

Sun Sep 17, 2006 6:20 pm

Great story, Khamul!
Very interesting, indeed. The plot is most original - I have never read a story of surviving Eight.

One nitpick:
It seems the nazgul wore no rings. Sauron kept their rings himself and so controlled them. Have a look in the Unfinished Tales "the Hunt for the Ring":
..."his mightiest servants, the Ringwraiths, who had no will but his own, being each utterly subservient to the ring that had enslaved him, which Sauron held."
So, I would say, the first thing to do was to go dig their rings out of the wreck of Barad-Dur.

I will be watching this story, please, keep writing.
Smile smiley face

Sun Sep 17, 2006 8:55 pm

Thank you both for your kind reviews.
Aganuzir, good point. I've borrowed Unfinished Tales from a friend once, and read part of it. My memory fails me, however. I've forgotten that part about the rings, so thank you for reminding me. It does seem like a good idea to add that in. I'll explain in the next chapter. I'm writing like mad.
So thank you. Very Happy smiley face

Mon Sep 18, 2006 2:24 am

Khamul, I know the feeling of missing some point in one of the many books. There are the Silmarillion, the LOTR trilogy, and the thirteen HOME books. There are a lot of pages in these books, and it is easy to forget some fact or overlook it. Whatever you do, keep writing!

Wed Sep 27, 2006 7:50 pm

I have read the story too. It's good, I have liked it. Me either, I'm writting like mad. So, keep on writting. It's always good to read something original like this.

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