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A New Beginning (PG)
by Senta.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [2]
Wed Jun 08, 2005 8:13 pm
I, too, enjoyed this story greatly. I have always felt for poor Faramir and his troubled family relations. I also love the depths of emotion available in Elessar. I would encourage you, though, to try to use shorter sentences if possible. Some tended to run on and became difficult to read.
 
 
The End of All Things (PG-13)
by Katzilla.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [9]
Warnings [Implied Character deaths, Adult themes]
Mon Jun 06, 2005 7:22 pm
I'm new to the site, but I wanted to comment on your piece so hopefully I'm going about it correctly. Smile smiley face I really enjoyed it, though it is a bit of a downer. It's actually one of the reasons I joined the site. I also admire you for having the guts to post a fan fic that's not so cheerful and happily ever after. The voices were well done and the speeches didn't sound as contrived as in other pieces I've read. And on a note of personal preference, there were no typos! Smile smiley face I hope to read more from you in the future.
 
 
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