Reviews by KristyDi

Yours to command · Fri Dec 22, 2006 12:08 pm

I'm sorry I skipped reviewing a chapter. Holiday rush and all.

Anyway. I'm still loving this. Eomer goes rushing to Lothiriel's resuce only to need rescuing himself. Such a sweet scene. WHy do I feel that trouble waits inside?

Wonderful chapter!

Yours to command · Fri Dec 01, 2006 4:09 pm

Lady Wilwarin is gonna be devious isn't she? And I'll bet she is NOT happy that Lothiriel got to sit next to Eomer during the feast.

I'm glad you gave Lothiriel a pretty and pratical dress to wear.

And look how comfortable she's getting with Eomer. Not only does she admit that she dosen't know what's on her plate she allows some of her inner feelings about her situation to show.

Then Eomer understands and attempts to help in an unobtursive way.

I so look forward to each new chapter of this story!

Yours to command · Thu Nov 23, 2006 10:59 pm

1. Lothiriel rocks! Smacking a warg to protect Alphros by smell and sound alone, wow. And impressing Eomer King in the process.

2. Not only is Eomer a great warrior, he's modest enough to know his limitations and honest enough to credit to a bilnd women with bravery not once but twice in front of others.

3. Of course Anamaria fainted, she's a useless twit.

4. I bet when Eomer finally choses Lothiriel publicly the Lady Wilwarin will have either sone devious scheme or some amusing historonics (sp?)

5. Rules, scary Muzgash guy has rules? I mean I'm glad he does. Eomer might be in big trouble if he didn't.

Great chapter! I actually said "Oh Goodie" when I saw the update notice in my inbox. I can't wait to see who figures out that Eomer is developing feelings for Lothiriel first. ANd when will Lothiriel's feelings grow. I bet she has crossed marriage off her list of possibilities in life because of her blindness so I doubt she's even thinking in that direction about Eomer. And what wiil her father and brothers say? And what will Eomer's advisors say about their King courting a blind woman? Making her blind was such a great idea.

As always, can't wait to see what happens next.

Yours to command · Wed Nov 15, 2006 3:46 pm

You can't just leave her there! Ack, you have me on the edge of my seat.

I am very much enjoying Eomer's character in this. Seeing this story through his eyes is great. I love how he's offended by the suggestion that he'd get rid of Galador and how he comments that the noble who put the dogs down deserved Lothiriel's wrath. In that same little bit you show us just how restricted her life has become. Her family is too close to see it, but through Eomer' eyes it's so obvious.

Ok I'll stop gushing, but I'm beginning to think you're a genius.

PS Please save Lothiriel soon.

Shattered · Tue Oct 24, 2006 5:00 pm

Wow, I'm bursting to know more. But even if this is the end it's wonderful. So few words and details, but heartwrenching. Great Job!

Yours to command · Sat Oct 21, 2006 1:54 am

What a lovely job. I love the paralell between the old useless pony that Lothiriel feels compelled to save and Lothiriels's perception of her own uselessness. As soon as I saw that a pony was the bone of contention I knew Eomer would wind up with it, but I love how he surprised himself by volunteering to take it.

This chapter did not make me love Anamaria anymore. I did enjoy Lothiriel's unintended little barbs though. The "Do you know what kind of company they keep?"
"Not really. Do you" was my favorite.

And the creepy bad guy at the end can only be up to no good.

I'm really looking foward to the next chapter.

Yours to command · Sat Oct 14, 2006 2:14 pm

Wonderful chapter. Lothiriel's frustration comes though so much that I was frustrated for her. And it's great that we're seeing the situation from her point of view. No description of movement of facial expressions, just what she feels and hears. I can't wait for more!

Oh and I really hate Anamaira.

Yours to command · Sat Oct 07, 2006 9:38 pm

HA! I thought maybe that she was blind, but dismissed it. I'm glad I was right because it adds such a unique facet to this story. I'm really looking foward to seeing how this develops.

Bound by Duty · Sat Oct 07, 2006 9:36 am

I'm a sucker for Eomer/Lothiriel stories and I'm especially enjoying this one. I love your Lothiriel, reluctant at heart but determined to do the best she can. I was sad when the chapter came to an end. I'm not beign critical, I just wanted to see what happened next. I'll be looking foward to the next one!

"Mysterious Fate" · Sun Aug 20, 2006 8:50 pm

I found this today and read it straight through. I appericate how you've slowly developed the relationship between Kaitlin and Legolas. I like 10th walker stories, but rarely find really good ones. This is one of the best I've found. I know you said update will be slow, but I do hope you'll continue. This is too good not to finish.

Login

Navigation

RSS Feeds

Reviews by KristyDi