Reviews by Xyzzy

The Circles: Book One: The Triumph of The Shadow · Wed Jul 27, 2005 11:32 am

Thank you so much for answering my silly questions. Nobody but you have ever answered me here, it feels good.
Smile smiley face

Yes your take on the Black Breath control must be correct. I have not thought of the effect on their own troops.

And nz may be virile and such. But still I think that will be a mistake to make them 100% normal kindhearted hotties only ... Shocked smiley face

..invisible. That was Khazar's way.

I have just read Khazar's fic, the Cursed Queen of Angmar. Very Good fic, EXCELLENT fic! ... but for one thing. All those babies and changing of nappies... Sad smiley face

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I can't put my feelings into words easily, but it destroyed all the good impression.

Please, please, please, NO NAZGUL BABIES!!!!

Love is a Fallacy · Wed Jul 20, 2005 9:10 am

I agree with you, rape is a bad plot device.
But it is not bad, not bad at all. Keep going!

The Circles: Book One: The Triumph of The Shadow · Wed Jul 20, 2005 8:32 am

I have disregarded your warning and read it and was NOT disturbed (as yet??) Very Happy smiley face

And you write so very well, professional. Smile smiley face

Interesting story. Sweet maidens, bad Easterlings, awful orcs. Sounds cool. At least the subject is rare.

What will it be, nazgul romance? Shocked smiley face

Weird somehow. They are supposed to be undead, aren't they?

And...khmmm, ARE the nazguls capable of sex? I mean a mortal girl will surely die of Black Breath! Or it does not bother the wraiths much? Perhaps, not at all? But can they endure long enough for some sport?
I am afraid my comments are too silly
Surprised smiley face

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The Black King (Tanka) · Wed Jul 20, 2005 8:18 am

Cute!
Especially the last line.

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