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These Same Walls (G)
by Lilan.
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Mon Jun 12, 2006 6:57 am
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| This is very sweet Lilan, but also contains a great deal more in such a short time - rememberance, homesickness, whistfulness, humor, and love to name a few. You do a lot and make it look easy, here. |
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I Shot... (G)
by Rous.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 10] Warnings [Extreme silliness]
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Fri Jun 02, 2006 9:28 am
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Ouch!! Too silly ...  |
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How Grima Lost His Eyebrows (G)
by NeumeIndil.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 12] Warnings [None.]
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Mon May 22, 2006 12:03 pm
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Stars (NC-17)
by SilverMoonLady.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 4] Warnings [s-e-x !]
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Wed May 17, 2006 9:57 am
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| "ecstasy trembled the stars." Yee Haaaaa. That's wonderfully profound, but ordinary too in that it's something everyone longs for. |
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Hands (PG-13)
by SilverMoonLady.
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Wed May 17, 2006 9:56 am
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| I am struck again by the lyricism of your words, and the depth of feeling they convey in Lily. |
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Never (NC-17)
by vladazhael.
Chapters [2]
Reviews [ 12] Warnings [Just sex, for now]
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Wed May 17, 2006 9:54 am
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I loved the action, and I loved the *action*, but I particularly liked how you caught Boromir's mind at work, and how his perceptions and feelings changed throughout. I think this is one of the best characterizations of Boromir I've read.
Looking forward to more. |
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Welcome (G)
by Vilwarin.
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Fri Apr 28, 2006 2:46 pm
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| This was very enjoyable, Vil, and a wonderfully fresh perspective. Could use a little betaing to be perfect, though. |
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Given the Opportunity (G)
by inglor.
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Thu Apr 27, 2006 12:41 pm
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| This is lovely, Inglor, both for the wit of its pairing and for the gracious ease with which it reads. |
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The Men We Become (G)
by Halfwest.
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Wed Apr 26, 2006 10:22 am
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| This is a very interesting meditation, Halfwest, and insightful character portrayals all around. |
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The Worst of All Evils (PG)
by Marta.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [ 5] Warnings [general despair]
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Tue Apr 25, 2006 9:24 am
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Like all your work I found this excellent, Marta. These are great, deep, resounding characterizations here in this brief but poignant vignette - still your text keeps us well in the here and now, very much in the room.
I particularly liked your drawing out of the simile re: Eowyn - that frosted crops touched by the sun do not revive, but whither. So often we hear similar things of her, but I have never fully understood them until now. |
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