Reviews by LydiaB

Dark Appetites · Thu May 31, 2007 4:15 pm

A very disturbing (in a good way) and perfectly formed drabble.
Great work!

Too Close to the Fire · Fri Apr 27, 2007 4:12 pm

Very steamy stuff! I liked the ending very much - Feanor exhibiting masterful control just to make a point.

My thoughts are being invaded by Bill Clinton now Very Happy smiley face

, but it makes me wonder whether such an encounter would count as sex? How far did they they have to go before their souls became bound? How would the rather prudish (as defined by LaCE) society of the high elves have viewed fooling around before marriage? I think I better stop thinking now or I'm going to end up with a wicked bunny of my own Wink smiley face

I'm Your Pain When You Can't Feel · Sun Apr 22, 2007 12:03 pm

This is a very moving testament to the power of friendship. Just beautiful!

Fire and Ice · Fri Apr 20, 2007 4:33 pm

Oh my goodness, an argument. Poor Morwen! Poor Gamling! I had just begun to imagine that a happy ending was in sight as well. Of course, I realised that things like war, orcs, wargs and a bewitched king might get in the way, but I thought they would muddle through somehow. When I read it though, all I could think was Nooooo! I feared it was going to go the way of Thomas Hardy novel or something, but then I remembered that I quite like Thomas Hardy novels and secretly enjoy being tortured by authors with sadistic streaks Very Happy smiley face

. Chapter 5 has given me a glimmer of hope, however, and now I may dream again that it will all work out somehow with many breath-taking ups and downs and surprises between now and then. Yes, in case you hadn't figured it out already, I'm totally hooked by your wonderful characters, well-paced plot and flowing story-telling. I wait excitedly for the next update.

Business and Pleasure · Wed Apr 18, 2007 4:43 pm

Very saucy Wink smiley face

and well written too! What more could one hope for in a drabble? I'm very glad you made Story of the Day, or I would have missed it.

One Night · Mon Apr 16, 2007 9:23 pm

The atmosphere you provided for the pub was fabulous. I felt I was there, sitting by the bar, dodging bits of flying table, and watching it all. And that song! Did you come up with it all yourself or is it based on something? A stroke of genius, anyway. It was so poignant at the end there as well - Gamling thinking she was pregnant and then later uttering those three little words. I realise that I'm running out of ready finished episodes and the instant gratification that they provide, but I'm very much looking forward to what I have left to read.

Evil Elrond · Sun Apr 15, 2007 6:46 am

Hehe, now I'm suspecting that my former boss was in fact Elrond in disguise! "Evil Elrond" is a challenging prompt and you have pulled it off with aplomb.

The essence of fire · Sun Apr 15, 2007 6:39 am

The fire motif really works and gives this drabble a wonderful poetic beauty. Good stuff!

Sam's Commitment · Sun Apr 15, 2007 6:35 am

Very nicely done Smile smiley face

Happy Night · Sun Apr 15, 2007 6:24 am

It's funny, but through the last few stories I had been so caught up in her romance with Gamling, that I had almost forgotten what Morwen does for a living, but she certainly has her work cut out in this episode. I feel quite tired on her behalf, hehe. Theodred is just delicious, such a smoothie! And now I'm wondering whether he'll be back and if there's going to be a rivalry developing...? Great work, and I'm looking forward to finding out what happens next!

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