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StoryReview
The Harbinger (PG-13)
by Caerali.
Chapters [3]
Reviews [5]
Warnings [A/U, Mild Violence]
Fri Jul 20, 2007 6:11 pm
Hi!
I like the story so far.
Only one quibble, Quesse should be wearing a padded coif of either quilted leather or heavy cloth to wear under her chainmail coif, it not only protects the hair from being ripped out, it prevents (mostly) the rings of chainmail from being driven into your scalp *owwie!* in the event of a head shot. Chain is meant to stop a cutting edge like a sword, doesn't do squat against a mace, thats meant to crush what *behind* the the mail. (Ooo, that's gonna leave a mark!) How do I know? I 've belonged to the SCA for about 20 years. (It's a re-creation group) It's cool, and you learn a lot about life in the middle-ages too... I'm I a fighter? No... Somehow the thought of getting in 40+ pounds of armour and getting wailed on by burly guys doesn't apeal to me. NOT the sheild-maiden type I guess. Yes, I know... I'm a wimp, But I hate pain... And I rather *date* the burly guys Wink smiley face ...
Keep up the writing!