Reviews for "The Harbinger"

Tue Jun 19, 2007 2:29 pm

This is an interesting beginning. Fingon is much more cruel than I would have expected with the hair thing and all, but then again, elves are fond of nice hair, so he may well have been a bit vain about his own - expecially with someone pulling it so.

I can believe that families would have been separated by military service. Poor OFC.

Fri Jun 22, 2007 1:03 pm

This story is very different from any I have read before. I wasn't too sure about the method of telling it through journal entries at first, but I really am enjoying this immensely. Keep up the good work. What an interesting tale you are telling!

Tue Jul 17, 2007 3:59 pm

Beautiful!!! a completely captivating story.....keep writing please!!!
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nimloth

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Tue Jul 17, 2007 7:02 pm

Thanks for the new chapter. Things are getting interesting. I wonder what is the deal with Fingorn? He is a very confusing elf.

Fri Jul 20, 2007 6:11 pm

Hi!
I like the story so far.
Only one quibble, Quesse should be wearing a padded coif of either quilted leather or heavy cloth to wear under her chainmail coif, it not only protects the hair from being ripped out, it prevents (mostly) the rings of chainmail from being driven into your scalp *owwie!* in the event of a head shot. Chain is meant to stop a cutting edge like a sword, doesn't do squat against a mace, thats meant to crush what *behind* the the mail. (Ooo, that's gonna leave a mark!) How do I know? I 've belonged to the SCA for about 20 years. (It's a re-creation group) It's cool, and you learn a lot about life in the middle-ages too... I'm I a fighter? No... Somehow the thought of getting in 40+ pounds of armour and getting wailed on by burly guys doesn't apeal to me. NOT the sheild-maiden type I guess. Yes, I know... I'm a wimp, But I hate pain... And I rather *date* the burly guys Wink smiley face

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Keep up the writing!

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