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StoryReview
Adrift (PG-13)
by dolarabee.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [14]
Warnings [Character death, but no surprises]
Thu Jun 19, 2003 7:11 am

Thank you very much for the feedback, ladies. :-0 Scribe, I really don't know if we'll ever get to meet the soft and warm lover Éomer remembers so fondly. We'll have to see what my ÉomerMuse has to say on the subject. She does have a mind of her own. Genesis and Viv, what can I say? You both seem to have caught all I wanted to show in this drabble. I'm glad you liked it. Viv, I know what you mean about the transition. I fiddled with it, changed it, came back and changed it again. In the end, I wasn't too sure of anything. I kind of like the teasing it creates... is it Éowyn, is it not... though I really wasn't aiming for that effect when I was writing. No, what I was after was a form of discontinued train of thoughts. You know, one thing to the next, not necessarily in any order that makes sense to anyone other than Éomer. And even then, I'm not sure he's making head or tail of this hence the title. But maybe it's not really working...

Oh, and no, there were no ulterior reason for putting the story in the AU section. The lover won't show up later on as Ally McBeal or Legolas' long lost sister. I felt, since I was mucking around with canon by putting this woman in Éomer's past... and assuming what his thoughts and state of mind were, that it was the thing to do. After a rather long list of expletives from Scribe, I'm now going to change it to the LotR cat, as Viv suggested.

Thanks again.
 

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Last edited by dolarabee on Thu Jun 19, 2003 11:49 am