Reviews by Juliette

Rider of the Mark · Mon Oct 16, 2006 6:17 pm

What a sweet, funny, bawdy and ultimately perfect wedding for Gamling and Aefre. Eomer behaved pretty much like I thought he would, and I wonder if the whole thing scared Lothiriel off or made her want to draw closer? She did dance with Eomer at the feast, so maybe the latter? And the thought of the elves whispering sexual advice in Gamling's ear was particularly hilarious, as was the typical "are we there yet," "I have to pee," and "I'm hungry" of the kids on the journey to and from the ceremony. You must have quite a bit of experience with traveling with young children to get it so right.

I am looking forward to more of this story, especially Gamling and Aefre going back to the Wold and getting back her land and house from the baddies who took it from her, as well as to the birth of that Shield Toddler or Horse Lordlet, or possibly both if you decide to gift Aefre and Gamling with twins (just think how proud that would make Gamling!)

Rider of the Mark · Thu Jul 06, 2006 5:56 pm

Loved this chapter! Eomer and Gamling in the bath house were absolutely hilarious, as was Gamling's way of sneaking out of the bedroom without being seen by everybody.

Now what the heck is Eomer going to say at the wedding? I am almost afraid to know, but trust he won't embarrass Aefre and Gamling too badly. Or maybe he will, who knows? It should make good reading, whatever he decides to say. And I wonder if Lothiriel will find out about his adventures with the homely twins?

Aefre was very typical of any bride on her wedding day, especially one who'd overslept. And it was so nice, the way Gamling's family fussed over getting him ready. I'm glad he decided to have his straggly beard trimmed.

Looking forward to the next chapter--this wedding is going to be something!

Rider of the Mark · Mon May 22, 2006 7:26 pm

Zee, thanks so much for the "tide-us-over" update--I loved reading more of Gamling's womderful internal monologue as he reflected on his life pre and post-Aefre. He's a lucky man and I'm glad he realizes it.

Take as much time as you like to update, I'll be waiting impatiently to read it ( I would have said "waiting patiently" except I have no patience--it's one of my greatest failings in life) whenever it goes up. Best wishes and happy writing in the meantime.

Rider of the Mark · Thu May 18, 2006 6:22 pm

Just re-reading and re-enjoying some of my favorite chapters. Any chance of an update soon? I miss Gamling, Aefre, and everybody else!

Rider of the Mark · Fri Apr 21, 2006 7:55 pm

Yay, update! Great chapter too. I was wondering if the news of Aefre's pregnancy was going to come out soon, but I wasn't expecting Arwen to question her in the bath about it. Darned Eldar, can't hide anything from 'em. It was a good idea Aefre had to ask if Elrond could check Gamling's wound. The bath scene was really good and I had quite a chuckle over the the remark about the boys farting in the bath tub!

The scene where Gamling and Eomer were fighting over possession of the spyglass was also funny, especially how Gamling checked Eomer by reminding him Eowyn was down there, and how Eomer asked Gamling's opinion of Lothiriel's, um, charms. Gamling speaking fluent drunkenese at the end was hilarious. I can't wait for the wedding and for Gamling to find out about the baby.

PS--how's that E/L plot bunny doing? Do I need to send some more baby carrots over to nourish it? I would love to read an E/L story of yours, especially if it's the Eomer and Lothiriel from this story. I found it kind of cute how Lothiriel was asking questions in the bath, it was like she was trying to find out what was in store for her if she married Eomer.

Rider of the Mark · Sat Mar 11, 2006 3:14 pm

Ah Ha! I was expecting that last line at the end--Gamling didn't go up that watchtower for peace and quiet alone!

Excellent update! You made me laugh at and feel sorry for Eomer being treated like a choice piece of meat with a crown on top by all those women. I hope Gamling and Aefre do take a hand in getting him and Lothiriel together. Note to Eomer--a woman with a "wicked sense of humor" might not be as upset by horses mating as you might think.

Good job by Eomer and Gamling of figuring out what to do with Fugol and his younger siblings. It was a nice touch having the tough captain turn out to be the Marshal's wife. Also liked the flashbacks to Eomer's childhood exploits, they help illustrate why he and Gamling are so close.

Looking forward to more wedding shenanigans in the next chapter.

Rider of the Mark · Thu Mar 09, 2006 11:58 pm

Great chapter Zee! Finally, Eomer has got his fine ass home and to my relief, has gotten straight to work. The conference with Faramir, Imrahil, and the Elves was very funny and very well-written, especially once Gamling and Aefre started arguing. Hmm, I hope Eomer can come up with something good when he "officiates" at the wedding--he's new at this, after all.

Maybe Celeborn, Elrond, Faramir and Imrahil should get together and write a cookbook? Those fish dishes sounded quite tasty! It was good to see everybody so generous when it comes to helping Rohan--it is no more than Rohan deserves after the sacrifices she made.

Was Lothiriel the woman who was bent over talking to Gamling's two-year-old niece? I can't wait for the wedding--drinks all around!

Juliette (the same Juliette who used to R&R this splendid tale on AFF. That site appears to have gone bye-byes, so I'm reading it here now)

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