Reviews by Khamul

The Circles: Book Two: Journey of Sorrow · Tue Oct 10, 2006 6:51 pm

Great new chapter, Angmar and Elfhild!
So, you finally explained the glowing eyes. This is the cat then? Heh, I did not expect that. Please continue, I must know the fate of the twins! (And Waerburh, and Goldwyn, Aeffe...oh, I'm rambling.)
To put it simply, good work.

Today, Tomorrow and Forever · Mon Sep 25, 2006 2:30 pm

Interesting way of putting his feelings.
Like he's struggling to stay afloat on the ocean. Or, at least that's how -I- perceived it. Nice work.

Real Valar Do Not Eat Quiche · Sun Sep 24, 2006 8:34 pm

Hilarious! I don't believe I'll ever want to eat my neighbor's quiche again, for fear that she acutally got it from the Valar! You never really think about them as good cooks, now do you? Paints an amusing picture.
Well done! Very Happy smiley face

Bilbo's Regret · Mon Sep 18, 2006 8:55 pm

A touching sentiment! Just like Ghettoelleth said, I've never thought about the impact that Frodo's leaving would have on Bilbo.
Poor old hobbit...

Darkness Remains · Sun Sep 17, 2006 8:55 pm

Thank you both for your kind reviews.
Aganuzir, good point. I've borrowed Unfinished Tales from a friend once, and read part of it. My memory fails me, however. I've forgotten that part about the rings, so thank you for reminding me. It does seem like a good idea to add that in. I'll explain in the next chapter. I'm writing like mad.
So thank you. Very Happy smiley face

The Blind and Buttonless Horseman · Sat Sep 16, 2006 4:05 pm

This question dawned on me today, and I hope I won't be bothersome by asking it.
Why would two Numenoreans invite an Easterling to go out on a spree with them? They don't seem to get along well really, even with the whole "brotherhood" relationship. So why Khamul?
Was it perhaps that they were so besotted, they didn't mind inviting an Eastern King?
I know they are on good terms with Skri, but he's not really one to do this sort of thing. Yet neither, apparently, does Khamul.
Just a question, and you don't have to answer. Update soon! I really look forward to hearing more of this!

The Blind and Buttonless Horseman · Wed Aug 30, 2006 10:18 pm

That was hilarious! I nearly fell out of my chair! ROFL smiley face

Also, we get to hear a bit more of Khamul instead of "Núménorean spawn" all the time. Not that there's anything wrong with them, those good fellows. Very Happy smiley face

I enjoyed hearing about Khamul's personality more though, as well as the looks. I also understand his relationship with Krith far more now.
I agree with Aganuzir, you should definetly continue!
Well done!

The Pants Game · Mon Aug 28, 2006 2:12 am

Hah! I LOVE that game for Star Wars. "I find your lack of pants disturbing..." or, "The pants is strong with him."
Har har.

WHAT?!? · Mon Aug 28, 2006 2:10 am

Paints a very humorous picture. Heh. Thank you for that. Smile smiley face

One problem however, I keep imagining english people in a petshop. Very Happy smiley face

I'm kidding. It's not really a problem.
Cute piece.

The Circles: Book Two: Journey of Sorrow · Mon Aug 28, 2006 12:43 am

Suspensful ending for the last chapter. Good character building on Esshardon, as always. I felt a slight sympathy towards him as he was explaining his dead wives and children. Sad smiley face

" So there are frequent plagues in Nurn...? Couldn't the Dark Lord do something to protect his subjects? Or is he only good at causing plagues, not at stopping them? Rolling Eyes smiley face

"

Well, I might be totally off the mark here, but I myself think he dosen't really care much about them. Plauges are good population control, and besides, in Book One, he didn't agree with Angmar concerning trade of Rohirrim captives for the Easterlings and Southrons. Not even for the Khandish prince! So, I don't understand why he'd care for the commoners. Good question though Aganuzir. I guess we'll have to wait for Angmar and Elfhild's take on it.

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