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I'm Your Pain When You Can't Feel (G)
by RobinKa.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [6]
Wed Jun 13, 2007 12:57 pm
This is an absolutely awesome drabble. I have just finished re-reading the Silmarillion and also listening to Martin Shaw's reading of it the the audiobook CDs. Finrod is one of my favorite characters in the Sil and you captured him perfectly to my mind. Thank you for sharing this with us!
 
 
Waiting (PG-13)
by Lilan.
Chapters [6]
Reviews [5]
Sat Aug 12, 2006 4:45 pm
Incredible. I haven't before read a story from Denethor's point of view like this. Very touching, and the end even more bittersweet--particularly as he didn't even realize that Sauron was still warping him, and tricking him into destroying his child.

It was so nice to read a Denethor story where he was shown as a father who was bumbling through parenthood, much as we do ourselves. I never doubted that he ever did not love Faramir, even though there were times where grief and rage took over.

Excellent prose, excellent grammar, and the bliss of reading a story without obvious typos!

I look forward to reading more of your work. Smile smiley face Thanks for sharing the products of your imagination.
 
 
The Horn That Was Broken (G)
by Lilan.
Chapters [4]
Reviews [3]
Warnings [None]
Tue Jul 25, 2006 9:36 pm
That was such a sweet story! Your interpretation of Aragorn's and Faramir's children was wonderful. So many stories have children being either too babyish for their ages or too grown up for their ages--you got it just right.

From your prose I could visualize the looks on the boys' faces when they broke the Horn and then when they tried to hide that they'd done so.

And the last bit with playacting of the Houses of Healing was totally charming. Apricot jam... *giggle*

Thank you for sharing your story with us.
 
 
Through Daeron's Eyes (PG-13)
by Edlyn.
Chapters [6]
Reviews [5]
Warnings [physical injury, nightmare imagery]
Mon Jul 24, 2006 7:57 pm
Oops! I missed a place in my betaing where we should have added a couple of commas to offset a clause, and we left the word "I" out of Daeron's recital of the Code of Conduct. Sorry twin. Thanks for letting me work with you on this. Smile smiley face

Now tell Daeron to stop withholding and tell you the rest of those childhood episodes!

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