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Crossroads of Time (PG-13)
by ellie.
Chapters [24]
Reviews [76]
Warnings [violence; suggestive situations]
Sun Dec 24, 2006 2:26 pm
Wonderful!

This story felt like it was a historical Tolkien story that needed to be shared. Then, at times when I read it, I was so immersed in it that I felt like it was actual human history. Smile smiley face

The original characters were delightful. The pace, plot and emotions were in sync and there were no missteps at all in the story. The storyline felt fresh and was accessible.

Thank you for posting your story. It is a lovely piece of work and I enjoyed reading it. I will check back to see if there is a sequel. I'd love to read more. Take care. *hugs*
 
 
Black Eyes (PG-13)
by Lialathuveril.
Chapters [10]
Reviews [33]
Sun Nov 26, 2006 3:53 pm
Lovely! I liked how capable she was. The scene in her study, with her ledgers, books, and maps, was the highlight of the story for me. I wish in the epilogue that some provision was made for her to continue to do business in the Riddlemark as she had done at home, by the sea. To keep her career so to speak.

The entire story was so lifelike, I felt like I was at the balls, island, etc, with them. Your writing is just stunning. Take care. Smile smiley face
 
 
Of Falcons and Mûmakil (PG-13)
by Lialathuveril.
Chapters [33]
Reviews [104]
Fri Nov 17, 2006 4:02 am
Delightful! This is excellently written; the content, plot, pacing and flow are superb. I can't wait to read your other stories. *hugs*