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Lost Out Of Time II, : The Coming Together (NC-17)
by brindlemom2.
Chapters [47]
Reviews [78]
Warnings [Alternate Universe Het]
Mon Mar 26, 2007 11:17 pm
At first I thought I read the wrong story. The other one ,you know, with Amarie. Then I saw the note. So now Elrond have 3 wives and 6 children? No offense to your plot and to you, but I feel it may be a little more dramatic to the plot if Elrond is still single (granted Celebrian is in Valinor) and bitter. With Arwen and Aragorn estrangement from him and the Twins ever-wandering nature, this newest daughter should be a great soothing to his heart. Just a penny of my restless mind anyway. Please keep up the good work. And thanks for sharing.