Reviews for "Lost Out Of Time II, : The Coming Together"

Tue Mar 20, 2007 6:29 pm

I ahve only just found this story. Iread the first two chapters and realised it was a sequel. I've just finished reading the first story.I'm hooked already. Pleaseupdate soon. Smile smiley face

Im really curious to see how this evolves.

Great stuff. Wink smiley face

PLEASE update soon.

Wed Mar 21, 2007 11:40 pm

I thought I recognized this sequel to 'Lost Out of Time1.' I loved that story and this is promising to be as good or even better. I also keep in touch with your other stories as well. I like them all.

Sun Mar 25, 2007 3:06 pm

I eagerly wait your next chapters. This story, and the one before it focus on one of my favorite elves, Elrond. How delighted he will be, I think, if he gets the chance to meet her.

Thanks for sharing our story. If you send out updates for new chapters, please, add me to your list!

Mon Mar 26, 2007 11:17 pm

At first I thought I read the wrong story. The other one ,you know, with Amarie. Then I saw the note. So now Elrond have 3 wives and 6 children? No offense to your plot and to you, but I feel it may be a little more dramatic to the plot if Elrond is still single (granted Celebrian is in Valinor) and bitter. With Arwen and Aragorn estrangement from him and the Twins ever-wandering nature, this newest daughter should be a great soothing to his heart. Just a penny of my restless mind anyway. Please keep up the good work. And thanks for sharing.

Tue Mar 27, 2007 5:11 pm

great chapter hope to read more soom.
ec

Tue Mar 27, 2007 9:03 pm

what will happened to Elrond's child from earth? and i cant wait for the next chapters...keep up the good work..

Sat Apr 07, 2007 12:02 am

This is getting more exciting and interesting. Hopefully they can find out if he is the grandson of Gel-galad. I just love these stories. I wait patiently for the updates.

Sat Apr 14, 2007 8:36 am

hi brindlemom2, i was reading your 5th chappie...and it seems i can't see the succeding lines in this part...
"The results provided each with a knife crafted by a local sword maker to the re-enactment community, sheathed in leather, and belted at their waist. In addition, a sword similar to the one that Elrond had carried was sheathed in a scabbard and lashed to the pack each would carry. They had discussed the wisdom of this because both had little experience with a blade, and at his age Ted was concerned he might be more of a liability then an asset. Both had trained with the local re-enactment swordsman expert to ensure they could handle their blades without endangering themselves but the fact remained they could not predict what style of sword work they would encounter. In addition and for more practical reasons, They both carried a bow and quiver filled with arrows obtained from another craftsman who specialized in authentic hand crafted medieval archery weaponry.

They were finally ready......"

do you place your stories in other websites? please dont stop continuing this story. thanks...
telle

Sat Apr 14, 2007 1:23 pm

Hi I have to admit I am a lurker but I decided to review, I love this story and the one before it and The Dreams one too which I have'nt read in awhile they are all interwoven into each other are they not? Its interesting Please update!(soon) LOL

Sat Apr 14, 2007 1:23 pm

Hi I have to admit I am a lurker but I decided to review, I love this story and the one before it and The Dreams one too which I have'nt read in awhile they are all interwoven into each other are they not? Its interesting Please update!(soon) LOL

Login

Navigation

RSS Feeds

Reviews for "Lost Out Of Time II, : The Coming Together"