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StoryReview
Ish Chronicles: Sins of a Race (PG-13)
by irishelf.
Chapters [5]
Reviews [11]
Warnings [Torture, voilence, prejustice ect]
Sun Sep 21, 2003 8:09 am
I can't help myself... I have been quite curious to see, how this story continues. Yet, I must say I am a little disappointed and I will tell you why: It may be understandable that Legolas dislikes the race of mortals. He may not show his best of behaviour towards them. BUT: The Legolas you painted is a sadist - period. It doesn't matter whether he likes mortals or not - this Legolas enjoys being cruel and torturing others - regardless of their race. I am sorry to say, but that is not Legolas - not at all. Please don't be discouraged by this review, but I just felt I had to tell you... You may find a way of working on this story and change a few aspects, after all, it has only been the second chapter. I would still like to see what you make of it, eventually. And as mentioned by Viv: A beta would be a great idea! Smile smiley face

Greetings, Chiara
 

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Last edited by Chiara2007 on Sun Sep 21, 2003 11:11 am