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The Phoenix and the Griffin (NC-17)
by Havetoist.

Chapters [104]
Reviews [83]
Warnings [Sex, language, warlike violence]
Tue May 11, 2004 3:38 pm

Read up to chapter 11 and I really hope there's more! It just sort of stops.

Haleth
 
 
The Phoenix and the Griffin (NC-17)
by Havetoist.

Chapters [104]
Reviews [83]
Warnings [Sex, language, warlike violence]
Tue May 11, 2004 2:49 pm

I've read up to chapter 6.

The original characters are well drawn and compelling, the situation in which they find themselves well thought out. I get the the impression that anyone who stands in their way will regret it.

I've only read 6 chapters, but I'm hoping a story as long, complex and interesting as The Phoenix's Griffin. (no pressure!)

Haleth
 
 
The Phoenix's Griffin (NC-17)
by Havetoist.

Chapters [23]
Reviews [21]
Warnings [Sex, war violence, language]
Sun May 09, 2004 9:51 am

The original characters, the setting and the society that the author creates are compelling and very believable. The story is both interesting and well told. There's way more here than the average fan fiction.
 
 
The Phoenix's Griffin (NC-17)
by Havetoist.

Chapters [23]
Reviews [21]
Warnings [Sex, war violence, language]
Sat May 08, 2004 12:06 pm

Up to chapter 13. Great battle scene! You've captured the desperation of those who watch their loved ones go into danger.
 
 
Flags (PG)
by NancyBrooke.

Chapters [2]
Reviews [5]
Warnings [None]
Fri Apr 30, 2004 1:29 pm

My irises aren't due out for a few more weeks. I wonder if they are the classic iris or the Siberian iris, which like to have their feet wet?

On a more serious note, Tolkien would have approved, having buried most of his friends beneath the fields of France.

Haleth
 
 
The Phoenix's Griffin (NC-17)
by Havetoist.

Chapters [23]
Reviews [21]
Warnings [Sex, war violence, language]
Tue Apr 27, 2004 4:10 pm

I've read up to the end of chapter 6. (I am a slow reader).

I really like the way that the characters slowly reveal themselves. The author gives subtle hints about Phaila and the Morrigan, enough to keep the reader curious about her background. There's so much left unsaid that Haldir and the reader are almost in the same position as far as trying to puzzle it out. It has really grabbed my attention.

The description of the characters do everyday things...cooking supper, searching for winecups...as the story unfolds makes the story very immediate.

I've got to say that those two really need to learn some lessons in commincation, though!
 
 
Pitfalls of the Palantir (PG-13)
by Haleth.

Chapters [46]
Reviews [91]
Warnings [Extreme length.]
Sun Apr 25, 2004 8:18 pm

To those of you who read the old web pages before I took them down, the rest of the chapters will be new material.

Thank-you for your patience and I'm sorry for being such a stickler for making you wait. I hope you enjoy the rest of the tale.

Haleth
 
 
Tales of the Hunter (G)
by ErinRua.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [5]
Sun Apr 25, 2004 7:49 am

Beautiful, as always.

A wonderful description of the pains of growing up for both mother and son.
 
 
Courting (PG-13)
by Vulgarweed.

Chapters [1]
Reviews [4]
Warnings [Murder, bloodplay. The usual.]
Sat Apr 24, 2004 1:53 pm

Interestingly creepy juxstaposition muted erotocism, horro and a childhood whine for a pet.

The mention of the child disturbs me, but that's likely as it is supposed to be.
 
 
Pitfalls of the Palantir (PG-13)
by Haleth.

Chapters [46]
Reviews [91]
Warnings [Extreme length.]
Sun Apr 11, 2004 11:27 am

AAAAAAA! Yikes! smiley face

Not the Spatula! Not the Spatula!