Reviews for "Pitfalls of the Palantir"

Sun Mar 28, 2004 12:41 am

I was disappointed to see that your story had been taken down, and hoped it was only for revision or something along those lines. I was pleased to see its reemergence on OSA!

Anyway, the first chapter is the real 'hook' that leads the reader onto the rest of the story. Mr. Walrus (Oglub? I've never been good at remembering names...) gives us a unique view into the world of Middle Earth's fauna - horses, ponies, and oliphaunts excepted. One begins to remember just how big Middle Earth is, and that it does not simply encompass the lands in which the Fellowship journeyed.

I especially love the line about the walrus's inference about the palantir...'since it was so big, and so hard to crack, it must therefore be an extra big and extra tasty oyster'...or something along those lines.

Waiting for more chapters,

The Power of the Book Hello smiley face

Sun Mar 28, 2004 12:25 pm

Between the walrus and the lemmings, this is TOO entertaining ^__^ More, pwease? *cutest look possible*

Tue Mar 30, 2004 3:06 pm

Considering her torture by lemmings for not giving her bugspray, I'm curious to see what she does to him for betting her..... XD

Wed Mar 31, 2004 4:47 pm

T'Ang? Oy.... very original Wink smiley face

Thu Apr 01, 2004 2:30 pm

Oh haleth why are'nt all the 65 chapters http://capernica.fws1.com/fanfic/palantir/palantir1.htm up here in OSA forum, your depriving us readers the full extent of this wonderfull story. I cant emphasis how much I love Inglor...and adore Haleth...this story reminds me of calvin and hobbes set in middle earth with a dash of sexual tension....and maybe love?

regards
Eressa

Thu Apr 01, 2004 7:05 pm

Kill. I was just reading the full story, got to chapter 64, and hit the Next button...........
No chapter 65.
It gave me the page missing message.

Fix it! NOW!!!! *goes on a rampage* Must finish reading good story!! NYEARGH!

Sat Apr 03, 2004 4:26 pm

Really didn't want to read this story. Started in the middle and ended up reading half of it at one sitting.....I do hope you will update this quick like! It's great!
Shalom!

Sun Apr 04, 2004 4:34 pm

Thank-you for the kind reviews, everyone.

I've taken down the web pages. The story wasn't completely posted there in any case.

I originally wrote this without thinking that proofreading might be a good thing.

It's amazing how time can change the perspective. I look at passages I believed were quite good and wonder what I was thinking.

So...please bear with me. It will take a while but the drek level from the original will (hopefully) go down drastically.

Haleth

Mon Apr 05, 2004 10:32 am

Eeeeeeeeee! Ah, lovely clueless Inglor..... how we love him Very Happy smiley face

Moremoremore!

Tue Apr 06, 2004 7:50 am

I started reading your story and I couldn't stop. I love both your characters. Its always nice to have to original characters instead of one. I'm anxiously awaiting an update. I was so dissapointed to see that you have over 60 chapters, but only 20 available to read Shocked smiley face

I so want to read more Banana smiley face

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