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The Three Forbidden Stars (PG)
by Feawen.
Chapters [5]
Reviews [6]
Sun Sep 28, 2003 7:40 pm
I think you need to reformat your text into smaller more readble paragraphs, other than that the fic is good, characters are strong and well defined.
 

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Last edited by Shalemni on Sun Sep 28, 2003 12:45 pm