Eternally (R)
by Ellbee.
Chapters [9]
Reviews [ 25] Warnings [Sex]
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Thu Apr 26, 2007 5:17 am
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I think I have read this story about eight times now. So it's high time I reviewed it don't you think?
This lovely story pulls me into a gorgeously romantic
and erotic world. I love your character descriptions . Many writers just can't recreate what it is that makes Legolas
so fascinating and desirable.
You made him real without taking away any of his beauty and mystery. You also made him very sexy without
overdoing it and keeping him true to his character and history.
Isobelle is a well rounded and (gasp) flawed character that all women who read this fiction will
be able to identify with. (and envy I can confidently say!) So glad she doesn't have
a paragraph dedicated to how her hair falls down her back in silky waves (yawn) and we that actually get to know her
thoughts and feelings.
i adore the seduction scene - even more than the smut ( an inadequate word to describe such an erotic scene)
This is what makes your story such a cut above all the rest. i can't believe it didn't win first place in the
Mithrial awards.
What were the judges thinking? Do I sound like I'm gushing ?
Please write more stories. You have a gift and obvious love and respect for writing and it's readers.
Very much appreciated and throughly enjoyed.
Faith |
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