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Always she forgives (R)
by princessaeryn.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [2]
Warnings [violent sex]
Sat Apr 14, 2007 11:55 am
This story isn't so bad....you just need to fix some mistakes....
I think Celegorm is probably only of the sons of Feanor to act like that.
 
 
Always she forgives (R)
by princessaeryn.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [2]
Warnings [violent sex]
Sat Apr 14, 2007 11:54 am
This story isn't so bad....you just need to fix some mistakes....
I think Celegorm is probably only of the sons of Feanor to act like that.
 
 
Another Man's Cage (R)
by DawnFelagund.
Chapters [37]
Reviews [30]
Thu Feb 08, 2007 5:18 am
I enjoyed your story from the beginning, but I especially love this chapter....

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She spoke to Nerdanel. Nerdanel, I want your consent before we begin the operation. I have your husband’s. I will likely be able to save the life of your son. But you will have no more children. You may die. Nimelomë had known us when we were children, with scabby knees from crawling about the mines and dizzying love for each other. She does not bother with formalities.

And Nerdanel’s faint reply: I will give my life for him.
.....

And I adored this part of the story....
I can't wait the second chapter.