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The Valar’s Atonement (R)
by wimsey.
Chapters [8]
Reviews [8]
Sat May 26, 2007 12:42 am
I have already reviewed but wished to let you know that the story still holds my interest. Thank you for sharing your talent.
I look forward to seeing this story progress.
 
 
The Valar’s Atonement (R)
by wimsey.
Chapters [8]
Reviews [8]
Wed May 02, 2007 12:44 pm
I've never reviewed anyones work before and really don't feel I'm qualified to give my opinion since I have only read and not written. However, I do feel this story deserves more than one review so here it goes.

This story caught my interest because it seems different from the others I've read here so far. I'm interested in seeing how she's going to interact with people that don't speak the same language. I'm also drawn to the story because she is reacting in a way I think is more real than anything I've seen so far. She's terrified and really, who wouldn't be? It makes it more real for me that they will have to earn her trust instead of her just giving it to them.

Great job....please continue.