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The Braided Heart (G)
by Thevina.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [14]
Fri Nov 28, 2003 12:32 pm
Hi Viv!
Thank you so very much! You have a point; it can get a bit awkward with both present/past tenses going back and forth, plus the time frame jumps somewhat. I'll look it over again and see what I can do to polish it.

Eowyn is a hero for me, but one with a definite personality. I am happy that you thought this was a meaningful glance into a possible background for her.
 

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Last edited by Thevina on Fri Nov 28, 2003 9:26 am
 
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