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Keeping Hope Alive (PG-13)
by Jael.
Chapters [7]
Reviews [ 10]
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Sat Dec 31, 2005 4:55 pm
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Chapter 6: LOVED Radagast. I loved that little aside to himself about Olorin and how he suspected he didn't tell Curumo and he would keep his secret. Wonderful!
I was surprised how little Estel knew of elves and orcs - I would have thought surrounded by elves he would have learned more. But then it makes complete sense within the plot as you have it: Gilraen slightly wightdrawn, Elrond preoccupied, and if they have not been in Imladris long... It's not a complaint, far from it. More an observation as to how I would have tackled it differently, I think, but I like your version very much, and as I say it makes complete sense and is perfectly valid a possibility within canon.
As ever the characterisation is spot on - I can really see and hear these people. Fabulous!  |
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Keeping Hope Alive (PG-13)
by Jael.
Chapters [7]
Reviews [ 10]
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Sat Dec 31, 2005 4:43 pm
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On chapter 4: I thought Dorwinion was made in Mirkwood? That's what I had understood from The Hobbit, at any rate. Or are you suggesting they actually imported it across the mountains? Or is there something in HoME I don't know about? 
lovely chapter, though. |
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Keeping Hope Alive (PG-13)
by Jael.
Chapters [7]
Reviews [ 10]
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Sat Dec 31, 2005 4:39 pm
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Have just finished chapter 3, and I have to say I love this fic so far. The characterisation is wonderful, and the speech is superbly crafted: archaic and yet flows beautifully - a hard thing to do.
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Keeping Hope Alive (PG-13)
by Jael.
Chapters [7]
Reviews [ 10]
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Wed Dec 14, 2005 2:43 pm
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A superb start, Jael. I am looking forward to reading more. Legolas is mature and written with depth - all too often he seems very young or has no substance to him, but it's clear your love of him, Mirkwood and their kin is infusing this fic wonderfully. You have considered the details and it shows. Young Estel is a treasure!
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Okay, NOW Panic! (PG-13)
by boz4PM.
Chapters [60]
Reviews [ 382] Warnings [none as yet]
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Sat May 08, 2004 8:54 am
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Apologies for the slower rate of posting so far with the sequel. I have coursework and stuff at the moment, and these past few chapters have been tricky to write as well. Have no fear: chapter 5 is with my betas even as I type. I am hoping the pace will pick up a bit once they hit Lothlorien, but if things are a bit slow, then my apologies, but such is the way of things at times... 
My sincere thanks for all the reviews and support for the sequel so far. *hugs* |
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Don't Panic! (PG-13)
by boz4PM.
Chapters [27]
Reviews [ 135] Warnings [STRONG language & angst]
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Fri May 07, 2004 8:04 pm
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I just wanted to say thank you to all those who are still reviewing. Though this fic is done and the sequel well underway, I do check in and see what people are saying about Penny (the poor woman! *manic laughter*).
Everyone's feedback, comments and support are very warmly appreciated. I am beyond stunned and pleased by the response this fic has had (and the sequel, so far, is getting also). Thank you. *sheepish grin*
*chocolate cake and hugs for everyone*
Boz |
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Elanor's Revenge (R)
by Julie.
Chapters [37]
Reviews [ 216]
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Sat May 01, 2004 5:47 pm
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TWO chapters?!! How did I miss you updating TWO MORE chapters?!  They were wonderulf, wonderous... SO good. *sigh* FINALLY Haldir is letting his guard down with her, and he came ALL the way from the fences just for her... *bounces hugely* MORE! It's wonderful! MORE! |
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Don't Panic! (PG-13)
by boz4PM.
Chapters [27]
Reviews [ 135] Warnings [STRONG language & angst]
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Tue Mar 09, 2004 2:36 pm
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I am a little confused. The last chapter was chapter 23 and I cannot find me mistaking 'mireth' for 'miriel'. Would you mind telling me where it is so I can correct it? Thanks.
And thank you for being flattered! |
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Elanor's Revenge (R)
by Julie.
Chapters [37]
Reviews [ 216]
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Wed Mar 03, 2004 10:56 pm
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Oooh! New chapter! HURRAH! Thank you. Loved this chapter. Actually had me bouncing in my seat and squealing cos I thought she was going to speak to Lindir... SO relieved it was Rumil, though that conversation made me cringe with them and the 'teeth' comment...! ROFLMAO
*sigh* You are a wicked wench, you know - tantalising us with raunchy dreams!! DYING FOR THEM TO GET IT TOGETHER!! Gah! Ack! Can't cope with it! And now... NOW... she's gone and signed up for the contest..! Had me screaming 'Nooooooo!' at my compoota screen like a thing demented. You can see it coming! Ai, the horror. *covers head and ducks*
MORE PLEASE. More please SOON! |
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Don't Panic! (PG-13)
by boz4PM.
Chapters [27]
Reviews [ 135] Warnings [STRONG language & angst]
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Mon Mar 01, 2004 8:13 am
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Cha - She has already met them. Elladan was the first elf she met - back in the woods with Halbarad, if you remember (the whole bit with the comb?) and she met Elrohir the day the scouts left. It was Elladan and Elrohir who told Arwen about Penny's story in the first place, and they were only told precisely because Elladan had met Penny and seen her behaviour (she fainted on seeing him, if you remember). At the moment they are away - they were the last of the scouts to return it tells us in 'The Ring Goes South' (book2, FOTR).
Thank you, as ever, for all the reviews and support for this fic. Most gratifying and surprising. *hugs everyone* |
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Last edited by boz4PM on Mon Mar 01, 2004 8:16 am |
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