The Fire Within (PG-13)
by NeumeIndil.
Chapters [3]
Reviews [ 8] Warnings [Adult stuff.]
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Wed Jul 30, 2008 6:16 pm
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I like your take on the woman we know as Nerdanel and Feanor's wife. The poor woman. To always be second because her elder sister was the fairer one in looks. Also, you have made Mahtan someone more than just the father of Nerdanel, and Feanor's teacher.
I think it kind of odd that Nerdanel's brother-in-law is a cousin of Earwen, who is of the Teleri, because Feanor and his sons later began the first Kinslaying at Alqualonde. Please continue this story. |
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| Author's replied on Mon Aug 04, 2008 9:29 pm |
I like your take on the woman we know as Nerdanel and Feanor's wife. <-- Thank you.
I think it kind of odd that Nerdanel's brother-in-law is a cousin of Earwen, who is of the Teleri, because Feanor and his sons later began the first Kinslaying at Alqualonde.<-- Please elaborate on this if you care to, keeping in mind that to the best of my knowledge, there's no reason for Mahtan's family and Earwen's family to dislike each other *yet*.
Please continue this story. <-- Several more chapters are forming in my mind, though I'm terribly weak in my Silmarillion knowledge, so they may take a while. Thank you so much for reviewing *and* for raising questions.  |
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