Reviews by Tourniquette

Okay, NOW Panic! · Wed Dec 19, 2007 2:42 am

Thank you, thank you, thank you! I was checking daily for an update. I should have just waited and returned a year later so that I would have more to read. It's never enough! XD I feel as if we're rolling downhill towards an inescapable cliff (the Scouring), and only Gandalf seems not to care where we land. O.o

I keep waffling back and forth on whether my inspiration from this fic means I should write a fanfic or invent yet anotherworld in which to explore a heroine's journey through a strange land On the one hand, I can see where and exercise like this wonderful story you have here would be great writing practice, there's this itching part of me that says, "Do it the right eay and invent your own world. Plenty of people have writen fanficand covered most of the bases. I know I'm reading a good fanfic when I feel inspired to write!

Anyway, faling asleep now, but I thought I should say that there are still people reading and waiting with bated breath for you to post again.

Okay, NOW Panic! · Sat Oct 20, 2007 11:14 pm

Still reading after three years!. Every once in a while I catch up. Wink smiley face

I am grateful for your command of the English language, for I think all of the insights and nuances would have been lost on a lesser bard. There are times when I think the healing/comfort/angst does drag a bit, but I would rather have you writing too much than too little. This way, we have longer chapters in which everything is understood, but there is enough left up in the air and unfinished in the plot that we have a great deal to which we can look forward. Keep up the good work. I hope you are planning to publish a wholly original work someday, as I would love to read it.

Okay, NOW Panic! · Thu Jun 21, 2007 3:52 am

You're going to finish this, right? I'm so far beyond hooked now; my only respite is the length of the chapters. It's been two months since the last update. Are you all right? XD

Okay, NOW Panic! · Wed Jan 24, 2007 12:20 pm

I love this story. Poor Penny facing the ridicule of an authoritarian society unforgiving toward independent women. Are you going to update soon? It's been two months now... Sad smiley face

The Circles: Book One: The Triumph of The Shadow · Mon Jul 18, 2005 9:30 pm

Oh, I know. I read some of the excerpts there (very fun), and I'm looking forward to it. I don't want you to stop what you're doing just because one of the chapters felt strange to me! Good stories are usually longer ones.

The Circles: Book One: The Triumph of The Shadow · Sun Jul 17, 2005 8:24 pm

Again, very Tolkien-est. XD I think the back story takes up a bit too much time here, but it's still a very enjoyable story, and the writing is superb. Please continue!

The Circles: Book One: The Triumph of The Shadow · Thu May 26, 2005 10:18 pm

Great use of Old English! I studied it a few years back in college, so I could understand what they said. I like the comment about about Dwarves smithying in Elffled's brain. XD I'm suitably depressed now. Thanks a lot. Wink smiley face

The Circles: Book One: The Triumph of The Shadow · Mon May 23, 2005 10:57 pm

As dark as it was, I simply adored this latest chapter. This time, I felt the descriptions completely pull me in, and I could almost taste the haze of burning straw in my mouth. Poor girls. Now I'm dying of suspense!

The Circles: Book One: The Triumph of The Shadow · Thu May 19, 2005 10:44 pm

Excellent writing. It's almost a bit *too* much like Tolkien for my taste--not enough dialogue and lengthy descriptions. Still, I very much enjoyed the plot line--I'll check back when the update thingie sends me an email. Very Happy smiley face

Funny...This Doesn't Look Like Vegas... · Tue Mar 15, 2005 12:02 am

Poor ALice! Even Aragorn is a chauvinist... XD

I hope this turns out all right for her, poor thing. Poor....loud...irate...little thing.

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