Reviews by Tourniquette

Funny...This Doesn't Look Like Vegas... · Sun Mar 13, 2005 1:01 am

Wow! Two chapters in one night I'm in heaven. XD

I think it's interesting that you chose to extrapolate on the possibilities of attitudes towards women in the cities of men. I'm not sure they would have been quite so blunt...then again, they could have been worse! I can only imagine what life was like in the middle ages...*shudders*

Write longer chapters, even if we have to wait a bit longer. XD

Funny...This Doesn't Look Like Vegas... · Sat Mar 12, 2005 7:47 pm

YEAY!!!!! *Dances*

I enjoyed Alice being more jealous that Eowyn didn't have to marry a pig farmer than she was of Elladan liking her at first. XD That was great.

You have to wonder whether Elladan really is infautated and not in love. Oh, dear!

Funny...This Doesn't Look Like Vegas... · Sun Mar 06, 2005 12:36 am

EVIL CLIFFHANGER! XD But at least you updated. I especially enjoyed Haldir's little speech... "Not ME, you idiot! You!"

Funny...This Doesn't Look Like Vegas... · Fri Mar 04, 2005 1:13 am

The cruel torture! XD AUGH! But what sweet torture it is...

Uh oh. Looks like Alice will have to exercise more self control lest she end up the hungover wife of Haldir. Ha! I can't wait to see what kind of mess this will turn into... *cackles when no one is looking*

Funny...This Doesn't Look Like Vegas... · Wed Mar 02, 2005 11:38 pm

XD That was great. I hope there will be jealous 'spats' between Haldir and Elladan. *rubs hands togetehr gleefully* It's like a cat fight, only Elves are handsome, whereas cats are furry and small, not to mention less likely to seduce you...

I'm having such a good time reading this, especially after a long evening of rehearsal. It's fun to guess what will happen next.

I have my own edited version of the LaCE, as well, especially since Tolkien states that the LaCE are the recountings of a human who only recorded the little knowledge he observed firsthand and may have misinterpreted much. Wink smiley face

Funny...This Doesn't Look Like Vegas... · Tue Mar 01, 2005 11:43 pm

It's wonderful! But you are EVIL! Evil, I say....E-E-V....E...I-L. EEEEVILLL!!!

The only thing that has me smiling is that I know you update regularly. Wink smiley face

This was such a hilarious chapter! XD

Funny...This Doesn't Look Like Vegas... · Mon Feb 28, 2005 11:39 pm

I love this story! It's hilarious. Especially Haldir. I fret for Alice, though, although I honestly thought Galadriel was joking when she said she saw a pig farmer. I'm assuming she's just going to run into one who happens to do something on her journey that helps or harms her. XD Please continue! Daily updates are great. Wink smiley face

Legolas ar Yende Beriorgano · Thu Jan 29, 2004 7:41 pm

...I think I may actually be addicted to your stories. O.o *headdesks*

Why do I feel like there's some imminent disaster looming on the horizon? It can't be that easy, even though I want it to be. *prays that there are no violent character deaths in the near future* Shocked smiley face

Daughter of Kings · Thu Jan 22, 2004 11:32 am

Thanks so much for updating! I'm squealing with excitement.

Btw, some of the phrases you use for Legolas' Elvish are incorrect. "A star shines upon (the hour of) our meeting" is 'Gîl síla erin lû e-govaded vín' in Sindarin, the tongue used by all elves remaining on ME in LotR, save for a few songs, prayers and laments that a Noldor might say (Galdriel, for instnace). The phrase you use is in Quenya.

Otherwise, I'm very much enchanted by this. It's very well-written and gives a whole new perspective to Legolas.

Legolas ar Yende Beriorgano · Tue Jan 20, 2004 8:22 pm

Ah, so good to see this fice here! I've been reading it on aff.net, but the format here is easier. Much easier. Excellent character development. I hope to see more soon!

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