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Tainted Light (PG-13)
by Eldalie.

Chapters [23]
Reviews [36]
Mon Jun 28, 2010 1:21 pm

Hi. Beautiful chapter. I love your description of Feanaro's feelings toward Silme. Now I am very curious when you will have Maitimo and Silme wed. Things will be moving faster from now on (the darkening is only a few days away after all). I'm very much looking forward to the next chapters. Wonderful writing as always. Thank you.
 
Author's replied on Mon Jun 28, 2010 2:52 pm
Thanks to you! Poor Silme indeed. Fortunately she didn't buy her wedding dress all those years in the past when she was supposed to use it. Wink smiley face Yes, the Darkening is really close...things spiraling fast. I'll update asap.
 
Tainted Light (PG-13)
by Eldalie.

Chapters [23]
Reviews [36]
Fri Jun 18, 2010 12:44 pm

An update so soon! Hooray! I hope it will happen again "g". Sad but beautiful chapter. Of course I'm glad that she chose as she did. Now to see how her life in Formenos will be until the Darkening. Thank you.
 
Author's replied on Fri Jun 18, 2010 4:35 pm
Ahah, I am afraid I could not keep up with the rhythm of such fast updates. Wink smiley face I'll do my best though. Very Happy smiley face Glad you liked it! Hope the future chapters won't disappoint you.
 
Tainted Light (PG-13)
by Eldalie.

Chapters [23]
Reviews [36]
Wed Jun 16, 2010 3:03 pm

This indeed was a dark chapter. I always felt sorry for Maitimo (and his brothers) for being caught in his father madness. I feel sorry for Silme too for having to make such a difficult choice, but Maitimo is right, there is no escape from Feanaro (not even after his death). I can't wait the next chapters now that we getting closer to the peak of events in Valinor. Superb writing as usual. Thank you
 
Author's replied on Wed Jun 16, 2010 3:07 pm
Thank you! Hope next chapter won't disappoint you.
 
Tainted Light (PG-13)
by Eldalie.

Chapters [23]
Reviews [36]
Mon Jun 07, 2010 11:37 am

Hi. Another beautiful chapter. I wonder about Findekano's attitude towards Silme and I hope that you will give us a reason for that in a future chapter. And from the discussion at the end between Maitimo and Silme I guess that the things that lead to the rebellion are put in motion. I also wonder if they will get wedded in Aman or later in Beleriand. I'm very much looking forward to the next chapters. Thank you.
 
Author's replied on Mon Jun 07, 2010 11:58 am
Hi there! Glad you like it. Hope you'll keep enjoying. Yes, things are getting nasty in Aman, unfortunately for our protagonists. Worry npt, we'll know about Findekàno as the story progresses...have patience. Wink smiley face
 
Tainted Light (PG-13)
by Eldalie.

Chapters [23]
Reviews [36]
Fri May 28, 2010 11:04 pm

Hi. Splendid description of Feanaro. I feel sorry for Maitimo and the constant comparison with his father that is very likely that happened in his life in Valinor and probably afterwards. Now I'm looking forward to the next years of the relationship, maybe even the wedding (if it's happening before the destruction of the Trees, after all many things can happen in ten years even in Aman). Beautiful writing as always. Thank you.
 
Author's replied on Sat May 29, 2010 6:14 am
Thank you! Glad you like it. Told you I was looking forward to THE Noldorin...Wink smiley face
 
Tainted Light (PG-13)
by Eldalie.

Chapters [23]
Reviews [36]
Thu May 20, 2010 9:29 pm

Splendid chapter. I like very much your description of Nerdanel, pretty much as I imagined her. I can't wait now for Feanaro's reaction to the news. Beautiful writing. Thank you.
 
Author's replied on Thu May 20, 2010 9:39 pm
Thanks to you! Smile smiley face Can't wait to write Feanor too.
 
Tainted Light (PG-13)
by Eldalie.

Chapters [23]
Reviews [36]
Sat May 15, 2010 11:08 pm

Hi. Beautiful chapter. I liked Silme's mother as well as Artanis's wisdom. Now I'm looking forward to the meeting with Feanaro and Nerdanel and the rest of the family. I'm still loving very much your writing. Thank you.
 
Author's replied on Sun May 16, 2010 6:22 am
Thanks to you! Smile smiley face Yep, the Feanarions are the next in row. High time for Feanor to return from his journey and see what everybody's been up to. Wink smiley face
 
Tainted Light (PG-13)
by Eldalie.

Chapters [23]
Reviews [36]
Tue May 04, 2010 12:13 am

Very beautiful. I like Silme very much, she is perfect for Maitimo. I can't wait to read about their life together, tragic as it will be (especially in Beleriand). I really hope you will write their story until the end. I love what you wrote so far. Thank you.
 
Author's replied on Tue May 04, 2010 12:26 am
Thank you! I very much hope to get to the end myself. Hope you keep enjoying!
 
Tainted Light (PG-13)
by Eldalie.

Chapters [23]
Reviews [36]
Fri Apr 23, 2010 3:17 pm

Hi. I love the story so far, your style of writing is beautiful. And I love it even more since Maedhros is my favorite character in Tolkien's world. I'm eagerly looking forward to the next chapters. Keep up the good work.
 
Author's replied on Fri Apr 23, 2010 8:29 pm
Thank you! Glad you like it. Hope you keep enjoying. I'll update asap. Smile smiley face