Reviews by ladyrheena

How Many Years? · Mon Apr 05, 2004 9:47 am

Ooooh, very very very good. Excellent backstory fillage. Me like muchly!

"Eighteen Hours In Minas Tirith" · Thu Mar 11, 2004 3:29 pm

OMGoodness this is such a lovely story!!!! You write so wonderfully and the characters are so brilliant!
If I gush any more I'll dehydrate so thank you for sharing this. It's wonderful, truly wonderful. Hannon le!

pretty little things · Thu Mar 11, 2004 2:54 pm

This sounds like it's going to be a delightful tale! You do have a nice prose style although you might want to just be a little more careful with your spelling- sight and not site, for example. Also I like the idea of Gandalf cussing but I doubt "for God's sake" is a suitably Middle-Earth-like one...try 'for Illuvatar's sake' or perhaps one of the Valar.
One gigantically huge thing I love is how you haven't just shoved Gimli off to one side as 'old and therefore uninteresting' the way so many fanfics set within the Fellowship do. From the way this first chapter's going it looks like you've got the characters set out for all of them and they're all going to have an active, participating role in the plot. Like it, and like it muchly!
Gosh, what a long and waffly review. I do beg your pardon. To summarise: I enjoyed this little bit very much and would very much like to read some more. So write some. Now. Or else. Please?
Pewtty please with Legolas on top?

Legolas's Song · Thu Jan 22, 2004 11:04 am

So sweet yet so sad! Very nice, and written in a Tolkien-esque style as well. You have the speech patterns down pat, so kudos to you!
Just one ickle thing...Valar are plural like sheep. Not Valars. Other than that, great. Further kudos and point-eared kisses.

Login

Navigation

RSS Feeds

Reviews by ladyrheena