Reviews by Fianna

Mairen - A Life Once Lost · Thu Feb 17, 2005 7:44 pm

next chapter is due soon.. almost done.. hehhe... real life has been hectic...and I am working on three seperate stories.. eesh.. I am so crazy... ay yi yi... hehe.. thanks everyone... I can't say how much I appreciate all your feedback...

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fianna

Okay, NOW Panic! · Wed Jan 19, 2005 9:38 am

What a challenge you have set out to do, both in the original story as well as this sequel, although I am disapointed to find you've only reached the journey to Lothlorien, heh ehh.. I wait with much anticipation to see Penny's reaction to the city of Caras Galadhon and Galadriel. I commend you on your excellent knowledge of Tolkien, and keeping track of everyone and everything. this is all very believable, and very hilarious. I find my liking for Lindir growing each chapter, as well as for all the elves of Rivendell. Penny's struggle to learn to communicate obviously is very trying yet I can imagine the thrill as well to see all that she believed as fantasy to be truly real. A deep desire for many of us to know Elves truly existed in all their ethreal beauty. Thank you for not making Legolas different from all the other gorgeous elves and I giggled at her reactions with the fan fics knowledge as well... how hard not to laugh when you know the elf is lusted after by the thousands...lol...

so I shall stay posted, hoping for additional chapters. I don't know how long ago you've started this, but just was told of it recently. Well done. Your descriptions of the daily life of the elves seem very accurate. I don't think many of us realize just how much work it took to live in that age with none of our conviences. It was not easy, yet they thought nothing of it. I can't wait to see how you deal with her arriving in Lothlorien. Great job!

Fianna

Crossroads of Time · Tue Nov 02, 2004 9:05 am

excellent story, Ellie. as I have told you before, I think you've a very creative edge here, different. Of course I know more than many, and I think the readers will find the story full of twists and turns... I look forward to more and just wanted to pop in and say great job.. keep up the good work... it's not easy with RL... so take those few moments and dream... we shall .. of Glorfindel and the days of old....

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Fianna

Vales of Sorrow · Sun Aug 29, 2004 9:57 am

Vi, I hope you get this when you are well and able to continue, my heart is with you dear. Chapter four, exceptional. The ending of chapter three for me of course was perfect, leave it one who holds the most caution, Haldir, in his usual perceptive way to finish the human, in the only way that would be acceptable. Injury to him would only fuel the man's anger and hate, leaving him apt to doworse to Mislyn or any elf that crossed his path. To protect not only the elleth, Haldir had to make that final decision, cooly and without emotion. His skill is exceptional.

Chapter four, therein, starts off as it should, with the others ready to follow Haldir's quicker response, and sheathing weapons drawn too late. Hehehe.. go Haldir... .. and their efforts to help Mislyn are so warming. The teasing, and thoughts the four pass to each other are both humorous and intriguing, mystery as to why Elladan has so much anger I am sure will be explained later. I like the differences between the twins, as well as Legolas, and Haldir as well.

It is good to see Crelain become such a strong man, and heartrending as well to see his distress in knowing Mislyn will not return. Haldir's gift of his armband, to reassure the human that he would return was priceless, a token of deep sympathy most would not see in Haldir.

Excellent writing, Vi. I am slow in finding time to keep up, but I look forward to each chapter. You inspire me with your strength and love for the elves. I can only hope I can inspire such love with my own writings. Well done and take care.

Vales of Sorrow · Fri Jun 25, 2004 8:09 pm

Vi,

I have finally read this, and hope to soon read Chapter 3. Excellent visual, albeit a terribly sad one of the poor elleth's handling by the humans. Such hatred to one who only seemed to show kindness. But what of their reasons? and Why does Mislyn hid her indenty? Such subtle and not so subtle questions draw the reader in. The elves seem powerful, and of course deliciously so, Elladan and Elrohir, and Legolas are so sure of their path, and yet Haldir, always cautious, thinking things prudently, but yet he too finds the situation too much.. What will happen now? Will the elves reliquish the mortals to the humans? or will they provide thier own punishment? An interesting question and I look forward to seeing the answer in the upcoming chapters. Your description and style is elegant, a testimony to the long years of writing you have vested in this art. Well done, and cheers... I look forward to more of this and anything else you wish to write.. a sincere fan...Fianna

Mairen - A Life Once Lost · Tue Mar 02, 2004 8:49 pm

Leilana.. sorry about the confusing pasting at the end.. my computer had a mind of it's own when I uploaded it and I didn't see that it repeated.. (again.. I thought I had it fixed...)

so sorry.. I hate that kind of stuff. thanks all for reading.. chapter seven will be up soon.. on it's way to be edited..

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Fianna

Amarië & Haldir: Paths of Destiny · Tue Feb 03, 2004 9:23 am

Hey.. excellent story.. only the best from you...

Amaire and all your characters are realistic and endearing... I love the whole story.. and am reading it AGAIN.. with as much excitement as I did when you first posted it...

well done, Julie.. your writing is superb, your attention to detail, and mindset awe-inspiring.... and your Haldir..

is well... Haldir... as I see him... gasp, drool, swoon , Thud...

heheh..

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fianna

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