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Finding the Right Words (G)
by nienor.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [4]
Thu May 18, 2006 8:02 am
I thought this was excellent - perfectly paced and not a word out of place. An extremely convincing portrayal of both Faramir and the hours before the coronation. Thanks for a great read.
 
 
Songs for Gilrain - A Tolkien-realm fairy tale (G)
by MaryA.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [3]
Warnings [none]
Wed Apr 26, 2006 5:52 pm
I think you have succeeded beautifully in crafting a Middle-Earth fairy tale. A pleasure to read!
 
 
The Gift (PG)
by Jael.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [5]
Mon Feb 27, 2006 4:10 am
Beautifully done. Great pacing, evocative writing and very, very moving. I really look forward to seeing more from you.
 
 
Alone Facing Darkness (PG-13)
by Galadriel8891.
Chapters [19]
Reviews [35]
Warnings [Mild Violence; Character Death]
Tue Nov 29, 2005 10:02 pm
I echo most of the other comments on this story - I'm also not much of a fan of crossovers but this works exceedingly well. I also agree with the comment that there's too much movie dialogue, but you have addressed that. Without being overly gushing, the movie dialogue stands out because most of it is so bad compared to your original dialogue, although that may also be an after-effect of watching them too often.

I just re-read the whole story so far using 'read story as plain text' (great feature, by the way) and I have to say how impressed I am with the develoment. I like the way you have woven HP spells into the action, but they're not taking over. I'm glad to hear you're back on track with this story as I'm looking forward toseeing where it goes.
 
 
Alone Facing Darkness (PG-13)
by Galadriel8891.
Chapters [19]
Reviews [35]
Warnings [Mild Violence; Character Death]
Wed Dec 08, 2004 3:35 pm
Very interesting start, well-written and convincing. I look forward to reading more.
 
 
Gifts of Life (G)
by fileg.
Chapters [1]
Reviews [4]
Thu May 27, 2004 8:35 pm
I know I've read this before, but I don't think I've reviewed it. I don't see that it's unnecessarily wordy, in fact you manage to convey a huge amount in such a short piece - friendship, culture, genealogy and hope and regret for varying futures. Very moving, too, and an interesting insight into 2 underused characters. Thanks for this.
 
 
Don't Panic! (PG-13)
by boz4PM.
Chapters [27]
Reviews [135]
Warnings [STRONG language & angst]
Tue Mar 23, 2004 6:32 am
Sequel? How can you doubt it. Yes, please Smile smiley face