Reviews by Nicari

Elanor's Revenge · Fri Dec 03, 2004 9:39 pm

Great job ladies! I am still holding out for Rumil, I love that elf. Wink smiley face

The heart jewel was beautiful, this really was a very romantic and symbolic gesture and I am really glad to see this physical token of Haldir's affection. It is one thing to think it, but another to declare it with words or a physical symbol such as a ring in our culture ... or a beloved heirloom in Haldir's world.

Okay, my last prayer to your bunnies/muses is that Lurien redeem himself quick! I just want to hug Tarwe... and bonk Lurien on the head with a troll's club. Okay, maybe not that severe... a nerf bat - yes, as I do hold out hope for him and I know he will find his honor under all that hurt that swirls around him and is now threatening to boil over again! Very Happy smiley face

I have been keeping up with your story and I am so glad you updated. Lovely! Now... the Lord of Imladris is arriving... the stakes are raised! Come on Haldir!! Get that elleth and don't let her go!!

A Tangled Web · Sun Jun 06, 2004 5:35 pm

Oh, BRAVO, BRAVO. I am speechless.... just amazing. This blows me away. I must go and read it again, it will be the third time, and I am still in awe of your writing. You warned me about this chapter and I was wary. But, oh, this is just fantastic. So much emotion, so much revealed.

From the first sentence ~ Arwen, Aragorn, orcs, injuries, fear. I think I held my breath from the first rustle of the bush.

Ell & Ro ~ I am stunned, heart broken, amazed.

The sweet elleth ~ Meril, she finally sees. Eirien, oh Valar, help her to forgive. Indelin, I have to go and hug her. And to witness Ell's fury! I am still at a loss for words.

Haldir with Aragorn ~ I knew it would come to this.

Orophin ~ Ouch. I can't imagine being the target of Elladan's wrath. He was being a balrogion though. I thought Rumil would thump him on the head, and rightfully so! I love Indelin and to have him be so harsh to her.... grrrrrrrr.

It was good to see Elrond, Erestor, and Fin again too.

WOW. BRAVO Nienna. I love this. So passionate and with so much emotion. Legolas is right. There was a lot more going on in Imladris than he knew.

Just brilliant. This has pushed out the other as my favorite chapter.

A Tangled Web · Wed Jun 02, 2004 5:11 pm

This is one web I never want to be untangled from. What can I say...

Well, Legolas' stomach must be in knots. He is in the dark and now Arwen is missing. His two friends are obviously having issues with each other! Rhach... more please!

Orophin, Rumil and Haldir - I never tire of that woven trio. Laughing smiley face

Meril and Eirien.... geeze.... Ack! What is to come of them and their suitors?!

Ell and Ro, I don't even have enough time to go into that segment of concern, but I know I won't miss a turn, twist, or dip in the rollercoaster!!

I miss Indelin, she is so lovely and I am anxious to see what happens with her letter. Shocked smiley face

Oh, the drama the suspense, things have to resolve soon Yikes! smiley face

right?.... *insert high strings here for tension purposes* MORE PLEASE!

Fantastic job again! Wave smiley face

Your humble reader and proud Pres. ATW Anon.

A Tangled Web · Sat May 15, 2004 6:05 pm

ops:

oh, and

again.

(since you already have my other review)

More please!!! This is quite the cliffhanger we are dangling over....

Pres ATW Anon

A Tangled Web · Mon May 10, 2004 9:52 pm

I am so pleased that Merill cannot get Orophin's gifts out of her mind. I want to know when the last time was that she felt as awful as she does thinking of Legolas leaving...

Indelin's letter... in the larder... with two drunk elves. Who knows where that will end up, or hopefully, it will get lost in there forever! Rolling Eyes smiley face

Elladan... could you please convince your brother to reveal his identity to Eirien so you are off the hook and Indelin can give herself permission to fall for you?

I swooned for Elorhir's sweetness to Eirien, this is so romantic *sigh*.

Aragorn and Arwen... their love is already as strong as mithril. Now, if only the rest of Arda could only see that.

I am really enjoying Legolas and Haldir interacting. It is interesting to get their POV, opposite as they may be when it comes to elleths. I am glad Haldir seems more light-hearted now.

I cannot wait to see more!! Very Happy smiley face

A Tangled Web · Sun Apr 25, 2004 8:01 pm

Time to re-read... always a pleasure!! Try reading from a different POV Monaleoht. That is always fun to do.

Shocked smiley face

I know, I need a life. I think I could lead a most excellent in depth course on the study of these characters and this tale by now. *snicker*

Nicari
Pres of ATW Anonymous

A Tangled Web · Sun Apr 18, 2004 5:11 pm

This just keeps getting better as it progresses!! I loved Orophin's confidence and Rumil's vanity, those Lorien brothers have it and they know it!

I never tire of Arwen and Legolas ~ their conversation in the first chapter has always been one of my favs and I love to read about their sweet and deeply bound friendship. Blessed Eru, I felt Legolas' pain and agony when he read the letter. Heh. And to think that Legolas must believe that Glorfindel knows....LOL! Oh, poor Legolas!!

I was so pleased with Indelin's confession to Arwen. She is so sweet and it was interesting to hear Arwen's response, and then "Haldir's" letter appears.... tangle, twist, gasp!

Okay, now about Aragorn and Arwen... this was beautiful. I could feel the weight of his fate and destiny on his shoulders. I have always wanted to see how this moment came about. Thank you!!! Arwen's instant and unwavering confidence in what power and abilities are inside of him was delightful to read. They are already what dreams are made of...*sign* Beautiful Nienna!

Letters, pranks, miscommunication, beautiful elves....ah, I love ATW! Very Happy smiley face

Bravo!!!!

A Tangled Web · Sun Apr 18, 2004 1:37 am

As I sit here, Niennanir,
Night marches and dawn growns near.
Haldir grumbles, the Twins plot,
Elladan makes me swoon alot.

What will be of 28?
Will the Lorien brothers be too late?
Will Indelin find her true mate?
Or Eirien's lust turn to hate?

And what of Meril, so brave and strong.
I pray that her walls come down before too long.
Arwen and Aragorn are lovely to see.
Gladders and Celeborn are always frisky.

I have reread too much and lingered so.
Will this tale ever let me go?
It is what keeps me from my bed,
The hopeful update of A Tangled Web.

***Just thought I'd say HIYA! ****

Pres. ATW Anon.

A Tangled Web · Sat Apr 10, 2004 12:45 am

Oh, yes... How could I forget.... Erestor's nod to Elladan treating Indelin's honor so carefully.... *sigh*

Orophin realizing his brother can speak dwarvish curses!! ROFL smiley face

This is splendid!

A Tangled Web · Sat Apr 10, 2004 12:17 am

WOW! Where do I start? So much depth and angst and history and plotting!!! Shocked smiley face

Haldir - I think his brothers' days are numbered for this tactic... they are in for it!! hehe! I sure wouldn't mess with this elf! Elrond/Aragorn - this was so insightful and I have always wondered why Elrond didn't just push Isildur over the edge and be done with it... this was very moving... I have always wondered what his take would be. Exclamation smiley face

Meril... oh to be wooed like this! I would be Orophin's forever! Indelin & Erestor... Erestor is so clever... *snort, smirk, giggle* I just love that elf's mind! (Nicari puts him back on his pedestal). Elladan and Elrohir... could this get ANYMORE TANGLED??? Did I forget anyone? I have to go read it again.. I was floored when I got to the end... I wanted it to continue!!! Very Happy smiley face

This is awesome!!! Exclamation smiley face

Okay, reading it again now..... BRAVO, BRAVO!!! Very Happy smiley face

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